Many people believe that the gap between rich and poor is widening nowadays, because in the current economic situation the reach become richer while the poor become poorer What are the problems this situation may cause? what measure can be taken to solve them?
The class difference based on the money and property acquired by the person prevailed in the society since the time of evolution. The gap between the reach and the poor has remained increasing as the time passing which gave birth to the several problems in the different part of the world. Here, I would like to narrate some of the problems that may caused along with the possible measures to restrict is at optimum level.
It has been observed that the average spendthrift of the affluent people will get increased if more money will be injected in to their account. This extravaganza attitude of rich people imbalance the economy in terms of inflation. Hence, the cost of basic livelihood will go up. Consequently, poor will starve of basic need like food, education, employment and so on. Nonetheless, economic imbalance can give rise to anarchy and crime in the society. People will adopt theft and cheating as a weapon to fight against the poverty.
Moreover, huge gap between rich and poor will create a social disparity in the society which may result in to the fight of superiority and inferiority. Society will get trapped again in the issues those were existed way back in the past of human history. For instance, if we look in to the history of India 50 years back, poor and lower caste people were not allow to enter in temple. High class people were treating poor like slaves.
Foreseeing the serious threat to humanity,It is the need of the time that the issue of class difference need to be addressed collectively by the individual, society and the government. To start with , the government should design and enforce well structured Income tax law that will keep the control on the income of rich people and provide gross space of saving to the mediocre. Furthermore, The society can develop and declare public appreciation programs for the rich people who contribute his prosperity in the development of poor people of the society. lastly, it is the moral responsibility of every affluent person that he should serve the society rather wasting money behind materialistic purchase. For instance, wealthy individual can sponsor education of child, marriage of girls, fund the new ventures and so on.
All in all, We can not eradicate the difference of rich and poor from the world ,however, we can put efforts to avoid the increase in the gap of classes for the sake of humanity.So, helping hand of fortunate people to the less fortunate, can be the only solution of this issue.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Here, I would like to narrate some of the problems that may caused along with the possible measures to restrict is at optimum level.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to may and caused
This extravaganza attitude of rich people imbalance the economy
This extravaganza attitude of rich people imbalances the economy
Society will get trapped again in the issues those were existed way back in the past of human history.
Society will get trapped again in the issues that were existed way back in the past of human history.
were not allow to enter in temple
were not allowed to enter in temple
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 428 350
No. of Characters: 2021 1500
No. of Different Words: 223 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.548 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.722 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.544 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 105 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.076 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.311 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...he world. Here, I would like to narrate some of the problems that may caused along with the...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... Consequently, poor will starve of basic need like food, education, employment an...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uperiority and inferiority. Society will get trapped again in the issues those we...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'entering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: entering
...r and lower caste people were not allow to enter in temple. High class people were treat...
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Suggestion: , It
...oreseeing the serious threat to humanity,It is the need of the time that the issue ...
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...lectively by the individual, society and the government. To start with , the gove...
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...ciety and the government. To start with , the government should design and enforc...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...elopment of poor people of the society. lastly, it is the moral responsibility of ever...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...fference of rich and poor from the world ,however, we can put efforts to avoid the...
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...however, we can put efforts to avoid the increase in the gap of classes for the s...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...gap of classes for the sake of humanity.So, helping hand of fortunate people to th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252136752137 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.130341880342 0.155533422707 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0876068376068 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.034188034188 0.0501214627716 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0213675213675 0.0437548338989 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145299145299 0.122226691241 119% => OK
Participles: 0.0363247863248 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66553134317 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320512820513 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.00213675213675 0.00163938923432 130% => OK
Determiners: 0.123931623932 0.0861772015684 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0405982905983 0.021408717616 190% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0106837606838 0.011925033212 90% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2509.0 1933.35771543 130% => OK
No of words: 427.0 316.048096192 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87587822014 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332552693208 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252927400468 0.28420135186 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173302107728 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112412177986 0.137316102897 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66553134317 2.80594681477 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.037074148 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526932084309 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 60.236227597 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4736842105 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4397809574 49.517814964 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.052631579 127.492653851 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.789473684211 0.814263465372 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.7664242574 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 1.69124875643 138% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.474799913676 0.332605444948 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131993033788 0.102741220458 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737351638997 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613836617819 0.534860350844 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179816864599 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227295047516 0.134430193775 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109023018284 0.0742795772207 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.487216235881 0.324371583561 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0690046128782 0.0638462369009 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.367049856709 0.228012699653 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659632488785 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 10.4468937876 153% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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