Nowadays, with the development of the society, human keep making progress in the educational area. However, at the same time, many people think that teachers were less appreciated and valued by the society than before. For me, I have the agreement with another group of people which consider that teachers today receive higher recognition.
To begin with, teachers today not only teach students the academic knowledge anymore, they also help the students to establish correct values. For example, the amount of the school regulations today is far more than before, except ruling the students to be good learners and focus on their school work, it also stipulates the students’ behavior, like don’t dress bizarrely, don’t talk rudely to each other and so on. These rules prove that the teachers are becoming more and more influential, they also affect their students’ view of life. All of these means they are more appreciated and valued by the society than in the past.
In addition, the levels of present teachers are much higher than before. Now, most of the teachers are also have educated by higher education. So they have more sophisticated levels of expertise. And they also have been trained to be good teachers by some teacher-training colleges. Moreover, they are more knowledgeable and their information is more accurate. Because in the past, many theories didn’t be demonstrated, even some were wrong, but now, after the researches of many scientists and professors, many theories have been proved. So the present teachers know the same knowledge as the teachers in the past, and they also know many new things, which make them become more valuable.
The last reason is, most of the parents today are also have been inculcated by the higher education. Previously, adults who didn’t get educated didn’t know they need to respect their teachers, so they never asked their kids to do it. Nonetheless, present parents know how good it is to respect the teachers, as a result, parents told their children to do it since they were very young. Respecting teachers have already been a constant quality which passes from one generation to the next.
In conclusion, if we think twice about this statement, it’s obvious that teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society nowadays than they are in the past.
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Essay evaluation report
many theories didn’t be demonstrated
many theories are not demonstrated
Respecting teachers have already been a constant quality
Respecting teachers has already been a constant quality
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 187 200
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 389 350
No. of Characters: 1873 1500
No. of Different Words: 187 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.441 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.815 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 69 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.474 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.04 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.789 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.554 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s today receive higher recognition. To begin with, teachers today not only t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'even so', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191810344828 0.229887763892 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.163793103448 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0926724137931 0.0866891130778 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0797413793103 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0560344827586 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114224137931 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0366379310345 0.0351676179071 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75070520472 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215517241379 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0862068965517 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.010775862069 0.0139019557991 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2392.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 384.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.22916666667 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338541666667 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2734375 0.251872472559 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205729166667 0.174417080927 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127604166667 0.112833075102 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75070520472 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.524397521467 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.4992400938 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2086693218 48.84282405 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.894736842 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 47.5542763158 45.7405998639 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.14388489209 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403663611953 0.300154397459 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142508315011 0.103427244359 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0863499376263 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554820912009 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158268126596 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176688828687 0.114077575197 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957843734229 0.0781384742642 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354960208545 0.336927656856 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998479033369 0.067059652881 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298006210181 0.210909579961 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687543457804 0.0618886996521 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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