About the common qualities of parents ,,, Some people have different opinions,but according to my experience and observations, the 1st things comes to my mind is 'confident'.Parents should be confident and give strengths to their child...bcoz in future , child should be live alone and may be face difficult problems ..so if handle such type of problems in childhood, then in future he obviously easy captures... and best comedy is when going fo interview maximum company asks ' R u ready to relocate '..at that time you forcibly say ' yes'..bcoz to achieve your future aim and any valid reasons...
2nd point is ' respectable to others'..when the person comes to the world..at that time he/she is unknown person...and blindly believes that he/she is my parents..and at that time parents taught anything to child, the child captures easily..if they teach moral thoughts from childhood,then obviously children in future respect the elders..
3rd point is discipline...its important point.. without discipline u may loss your aim...
I think all these above minimum qualities should have for parents......
- What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- Teachers were more appreciated and valued by the society in the past than today 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291666666667 0.229887763892 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.145833333333 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0989583333333 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0572916666667 0.0685040099705 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0833333333333 0.118717715034 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0104166666667 0.0351676179071 30% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.16819391407 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0416666666667 0.0309702414327 135% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0520833333333 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260416666667 0.0209618222197 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.0139019557991 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1107.0 2387.08602151 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 408.028673835 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43604651163 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.48200974243 81% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401162790698 0.338922669872 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296511627907 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232558139535 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174418604651 0.112833075102 155% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16819391407 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.703488372093 0.524397521467 134% => OK
Word variations: 77.8834798828 59.2087087015 132% => OK
How many sentences: 2.0 20.6684587814 10% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.5533526081 418% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 479.5 48.84282405 982% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 553.5 120.699889404 459% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.0 20.5533526081 418% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 0.644075263715 466% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.54480286738 379% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 115.651162791 45.7405998639 253% => OK
Elegance: 1.57446808511 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194446337566 0.300154397459 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0675339890659 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0 0.0752933317313 0% => Sentences are so close to each other.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.497263757937 201% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.54384052431e-16 0.151897553556 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115551463377 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783749583275 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.153061473714 0.336927656856 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.171463903299 0.067059652881 256% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095596393816 0.210909579961 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711123071309 0.0618886996521 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8870967742 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 1.0 13.6433691756 7% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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