What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.
When it comes to the issue the important qualities for a best parent, people surely may have different opinions about this. According to my experience and observation, the parents should be a good listener, up to date, and their behavior must bases on morality.
First and the most important feature is that a good parent should be a good listener. As we all know, teenagers usually face with a many predicaments like emotional problems. So, a parent should allocate some time for listen to them. Although, they may not have all solution or answers, they surely give their children the sense of belonging that they are not alone. I think that there is not a better instance than myself when I was studying to enter in the university. At that time, my girl friend left me because of some conflicts. This had many negative effects on me, so that I could not focus on my aim for going to the university. One day when my mother noticed my confusion and spoke with me about this problem. Eventually, I gradually forgot her and spent much time for studying.
A further point we must consider is that parents should up date their knowledge according the time. Nowadays, we are witnessing a great deal of modern technologies are at juveniles’ disposal. Hence, parents can eliminate the generation gap between them and their children only by increasing their knowledge about new age. I think that a small example can give some light on this matter. If parents have not enough knowledge about the Internet and social network applications, which occupy children all day long, they never can supervise their children in virtual world. Moreover, parents can not build a proper connection with their children, because they can not comprehend them and their world.
Apart from points I made above, parents must be moral. As we all know, we are living a culture that people face many criminals every day, which derive of immorality. In this way, parents have an obligation to teach their children to obey morality. Parents never can achieve this unless they must improve their manner because a layer could not encourage people to honesty.
All above evidence supports this undeniable a good parent should pay more attention on their children and listen to their problems. Moreover, parents should increase their knowledge about new world and also maintain ethics principle. Last but not least, I hope that all parents gain the deeper understanding of how their behavior plays a crucial role in their children life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o the issue the important qualities for a best parent, people surely may have dif...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'apart from', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228329809725 0.229887763892 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.133192389006 0.158761421928 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0655391120507 0.0866891130778 76% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0591966173362 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0993657505285 0.0685040099705 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107822410148 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0190274841438 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59230826631 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0211416490486 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0951374207188 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422832980973 0.0209618222197 202% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.014799154334 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2513.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94089834515 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342789598109 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248226950355 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182033096927 0.174417080927 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125295508274 0.112833075102 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59230826631 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520094562648 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.9123250157 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.625 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9263237388 48.84282405 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.708333333 120.699889404 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.4476950355 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.21739130435 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199492182065 0.300154397459 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0763258988973 0.103427244359 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0863286025752 0.0752933317313 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.43906079023 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149286420332 0.151897553556 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687863548176 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475530968835 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.274894169196 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0297121319454 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136085369114 0.210909579961 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484585724357 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.75985663082 290% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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