The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
It is debatable whether the luxuries and conveniences of modern days work as a blockage for people to become strong and independent individuals. Although there are some drawbacks regarding comfort yielded by high technology of current life, the luxuries and conveniences are conducive to individuals to form unique identities.
To begin with, conveniences provide more resources for people to formulate their distinct thoughts and become strong individuals. In the past where there were not enough devices for people to access different news and literatures, it was extremely difficult for people to create their own objective opinions because they could only gather information from one or two sources. Nowadays, with the advent of internet and globalization, people are able to garner immense amount of information, thus forming objective ideas and having their own decisions in life. Had there been no development, and societies were still stagnant in the past days without luxuries and conveniences, there would have been little to no betterment of society by strong and independent individuals. It is through flowing information through high technology that enabled people to become more active in social issues and injustice.
Furthermore, luxuries and conveniences in these days aid societies to nurture more distinct and strong individuals. Through luxuries of modern days such as automobiles and computers, people spend less time in doing unnecessary time consuming works; transportation time and communication time is reduced. The change provided more time for people to deal with highly complicated tasks, which gives higher motivation for people to excel in their fields and develop into strong and independent individuals. Without the metamorphosis, people in modern days would still waster a lot of time in unfruitful tasks and lose opportunities to encounter more meaningful works.
Admittedly, the luxuries and conveniences could engender more desires and materialistic thoughts; however, there are still more pros than cons. Also, being engrossed into comforts given by conveniences and becoming a passive individual are more due to individuals' lack or willpower or ability to self-control their desires. Thus, the argument that contends the luxuries and conveniences of modern life prevent people from becoming more independent is not cogent.
All in all, comforts of current days do not serve as a hindrance for people to develop into strong and independent individuals. Conveniences provide more resources and time for people to focus on more intricate tasks and thoughts that are highly conducive to becoming individuals with unique qualities.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
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arguments: OK
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flaws:
No. of Words: 403
No. of Different Words: 192
For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 403 350
No. of Characters: 2223 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.48 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.516 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.968 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 177 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 73 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.876 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.619 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.096 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27397260274 0.240241500013 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.141552511416 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.130136986301 0.0880659088768 148% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456621004566 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205479452055 0.0444667217837 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118721461187 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.041095890411 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05876133593 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0433789954338 0.030933414821 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0456621004566 0.0997080785238 46% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00913242009132 0.0249443105267 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114155251142 0.0148568991511 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2677.0 2732.02544248 98% => OK
No of words: 403.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.64267990074 6.0361032391 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.446650124069 0.366273622748 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.325062034739 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258064516129 0.200843997647 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186104218362 0.132149295362 141% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05876133593 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 219.290929204 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 52.5158778946 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 25.1875 23.380412469 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5468431988 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.3125 141.124799967 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 23.380412469 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.674092028746 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 57.6937034739 51.4728631049 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.08791208791 1.64882698954 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449276863734 0.391690518653 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11038173284 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0354869875159 0.077325440228 46% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.619173715733 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0802070860588 0.149214159877 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.217471061052 0.161403998019 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932955823963 0.0892212321368 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395016151313 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0697591565623 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.332240769322 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403957857867 0.0653680567796 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.