TPO 25 , Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
The human lifestyle has been changed in the recent century. Some people believe that these changes have not any effects on the human corporation on society. However, others hold the view that young people participation on communities has been reduced in communities in compare to the past. I strongly agree with later group opinion that youngers are less involved in communities nowadays. We should look for the reasons on the society's needs and busy lifestyle.
Nowadays communities need less manpower. In fact, new inventions have decreased the demanded human physical presents for doing variety tasks, so this change has reduced needed human helps for communities activities. In other words, the human participation has been decreased because the society need for manpower has reduced. For example, a community home for the aged may have needed some volunteers to help them in cleaning and housekeeping tasks. However, this demands has been decreased by the invention of new machines that doing housekeeping tasks. For example,dishwashing is done by the dishwasher and other tasks similar to this that all we know.
The human life has become busier. Indeed, the new lifestyle has led society to the direction of busier lifestyle. As we know, the number of core families is increasing every day. Therefore, they don't have the same support as the extended families provide. Consequently, people who live in core family have more task to do in their homes which consume most of their time. Accordingly, the number of hours that people evolve in volunteering jobs decreases.
To put it into a nutshell, I strongly believe that the new lifestyle has decreased human participation in society activities. Technology has helped scientists to invent new machines to decrease manpower demands. Moreover, the change in family structure has made the life busier that has an effect on each person's available hours for volunteering. In my opinion, people should be informed that they can fit some volunteering activities even on their tight schedule.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dishwashing
...at doing housekeeping tasks. For example,dishwashing is done by the dishwasher and other tas...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s increasing every day. Therefore, they dont have the same support as the extended f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in fact', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275482093664 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.187327823691 0.158761421928 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0798898071625 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0358126721763 0.046263068375 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0358126721763 0.0685040099705 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129476584022 0.118717715034 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0716253443526 0.0351676179071 204% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.89429003826 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0220385674931 0.0309702414327 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101928374656 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110192837466 0.0209618222197 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0110192837466 0.0139019557991 79% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2041.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 326.0 408.028673835 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26073619632 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383435582822 0.338922669872 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29754601227 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.230061349693 0.174417080927 132% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144171779141 0.112833075102 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89429003826 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536809815951 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 56.674094595 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5238095238 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7659881176 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1904761905 120.699889404 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 45.2784107508 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.84042553191 1.45489161554 126% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175128970621 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110865269418 0.103427244359 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751582673713 0.0752933317313 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.484096063181 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111469354675 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683054968776 0.114077575197 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382557755907 0.0781384742642 49% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337283393209 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.044499268449 0.067059652881 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124136735781 0.210909579961 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443586137791 0.0618886996521 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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