The article states that one type of a evergreen tree strats to die in the state of Florida and provides three reasons of supporte. In contrast, the professor explains that all of this three reasons are not acceptable and repudistes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading claims that we can gather Torreya in microclimate area. Controversely, the speaker refutes this points by imparting that it is not sanisfactory solutions. He asserts that nowadays by increasing in temprator are coused by global warming, we predict all parts of Florida will become dry and Florida are not suitble place for this trees.
In addition, the passage points that we have this choice for relocating this species to completely different place that far from its Florida microclimate. However, the lecture says that this way once examine on one type of trees, Black Locast, that not good idea because after sometimes by growing this trees many other specis were going to die. According to the professor we can not use this way.
Finally, the text contents that we can locate Torreya in one place under observation. On the contrary, the lecture opposes this point by expressing that we can not do this due to the diseases. We really need large vast place for cultivating this trees because a research center has not spesious enough for this trees and maybe start to damage themselves.
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Essay evaluation report
a evergreen tree
an evergreen tree
all of this three reasons are
all of these three reasons are
by increasing in temprator are coused by global warming,
by increasing in temprator which is caused by global warming,
Florida are not suitble place for this trees.
Florida is not a suitble place for this tree.
Sentence: He asserts that nowadays by increasing in temprator are coused by global warming, we predict all parts of Florida will become dry and Florida are not suitble place for this trees.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and trees
Sentence: However, the lecture says that this way once examine on one type of trees, Black Locast, that not good idea because after sometimes by growing this trees many other specis were going to die.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and trees
Sentence: We really need large vast place for cultivating this trees because a research center has not spesious enough for this trees and maybe start to damage themselves.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to this and trees
to completely different place that far from its Florida microclimate.
to completely different places that are far from their Florida microclimate.
that not good idea
that are not a good idea
a research center has not spesious enough
a research center is not spacious enough
Sentence: The article states that one type of a evergreen tree strats to die in the state of Florida and provides three reasons of supporte.
Error: strats Suggestion: starts
Error: supporte Suggestion: support
Sentence: In contrast, the professor explains that all of this three reasons are not acceptable and repudistes each of the author's reasons.
Error: repudistes Suggestion: repudiates
Sentence: First, the reading claims that we can gather Torreya in microclimate area.
Error: microclimate Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Controversely, the speaker refutes this points by imparting that it is not sanisfactory solutions.
Error: imparting Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: sanisfactory Suggestion: satisfactory
Sentence: He asserts that nowadays by increasing in temprator are coused by global warming, we predict all parts of Florida will become dry and Florida are not suitble place for this trees.
Error: coused Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: temprator Suggestion: temptation ?
Error: suitble Suggestion: suitable
Sentence: In addition, the passage points that we have this choice for relocating this species to completely different place that far from its Florida microclimate.
Error: microclimate Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: However, the lecture says that this way once examine on one type of trees, Black Locast, that not good idea because after sometimes by growing this trees many other specis were going to die.
Error: specis Suggestion: species
Sentence: We really need large vast place for cultivating this trees because a research center has not spesious enough for this trees and maybe start to damage themselves.
Error: spesious Suggestion: specious
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
Read a good grammar book.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 18 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 11 12
No. of Words: 231 250
No. of Characters: 1117 1200
No. of Different Words: 132 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.835 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.495 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.532 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.617 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.2 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'type of'.
Suggestion: type of
The article states that one type of a evergreen tree strats to die in the sta...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The article states that one type of a evergreen tree strats to die in the sta...
^
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...y and Florida are not suitble place for this trees. In addition, the passage points...
^^^^
Line 4, column 306, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...arch center has not spesious enough for this trees and maybe start to damage themsel...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242063492063 0.261695866417 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.138888888889 0.158904122519 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674603174603 0.0723426182421 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0674603174603 0.0435111971325 155% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0436507936508 0.0277247811725 157% => OK
Prepositions: 0.154761904762 0.128828473217 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0357142857143 0.0370669169778 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59586534596 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.0208969081088 114% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.119047619048 0.128158765124 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0198412698413 0.0158828679856 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00396825396825 0.0114777025283 35% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1370.0 1645.83664459 83% => OK
No of words: 231.0 271.125827815 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93073593074 6.08160592843 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04852973271 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354978354978 0.374372842146 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.272727272727 0.287516216867 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.160173160173 0.187439937562 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116883116883 0.113142543107 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59586534596 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580086580087 0.539623497131 107% => OK
Word variations: 57.0685473628 53.8517498576 106% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0529801325 84% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.7502111507 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.700378383 49.3711431718 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.545454545 132.220823453 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.7502111507 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.878197800319 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 48.2727272727 50.5018328374 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.73015873016 1.90840788429 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484474622095 0.549887131256 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13921855915 0.142949733639 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0907903755715 0.0787303798458 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.627462581089 0.631733273073 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137486130869 0.139662658121 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233475962218 0.266732575781 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088459326128 0.103435571967 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377936249327 0.414875509568 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.092030120355 0.0530846634433 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336403740708 0.40443939384 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03771515954 0.0528353158467 71% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.26048565121 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 0.0 3.49668874172 0% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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