Well, everyone of us living in this world full of technology and we can access the all the information from the sitting place. Because of these facilities we can know thing what is happening around us as well as the international events. So, basically most of us having some idea about the news, in this situation people we are supposed to know what is happening even ti does not impact on our life.
To begin with, earlier people could not able to get the more information about their region and country due to the lack technological advancement in varies field but today it is not like that even if you ask you're kids, what is special news today. They have lots of information in their fingertips that is amazing. So, when the small kids able to know the all the events, adult we also must know the events which happening around which helps lots of ways. For example, someone every well about general news, they can participate quiz programs which gives more opportunity who want to improve themselves in their field.
Further, keeping events update will you chance to win debate sessions. For example, a friend of mine always store the current events in his brain because of that, he is able argues so many matters in the whats up message, no one can beat him in the debate. It's all happening because he knows the current events surrounding the world whether it is relevant or not is secondary for him that always keeping up among our friends circle which I really want to appreciate him at this moment.
Moreover, knowing the events assist in helping others when there is indeed. For example, when there was heavy rainfall on last year in Chennai. Most of the people came forward to help the people those who are in need, they provide food, clothes, shelter and so on. How it became possible? Because knowing the events what is happening surrounding them otherwise that would not be possible.
Finally, knowing the events around us will helps yourself there is emergency. For example, when there is unpopular festival is there, if, we know that so on so day and particular ethnic people celebrate that festival, then you can aware about road traffic other problems related to that festival function which helps you to decide whether to outside or better to take leave. In these ways events around the world is very important for us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...day it is not like that even if you ask youre kids, what is special news today. They ...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...e is able argues so many matters in the whats up message, no one can beat him in the ...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding events'?
Suggestion: the surrounding events
...ld not be possible. Finally, knowing the events around us will helps yourself there is emergency....
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ally, knowing the events around us will helps yourself there is emergency. For exampl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212860310421 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.152993348115 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709534368071 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0665188470067 0.046263068375 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.079822616408 0.0685040099705 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119733924612 0.118717715034 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0376940133038 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36831780148 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0288248337029 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00221729490022 0.00188951952338 117% => OK
Determiners: 0.0864745011086 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0221729490022 0.0209618222197 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0376940133038 0.0139019557991 271% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2348.0 2387.08602151 98% => OK
No of words: 410.0 408.028673835 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72682926829 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319512195122 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214634146341 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131707317073 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0829268292683 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36831780148 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534146341463 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.6764255291 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.7777777778 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8396075653 48.84282405 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.444444444 120.699889404 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 20.5533526081 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.644075263715 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 44.2411924119 45.7405998639 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.23703703704 1.45489161554 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364802860458 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118747911333 0.103427244359 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0730345091009 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519754034463 0.497263757937 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163988363142 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141573370671 0.114077575197 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063151624364 0.0781384742642 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.33045027615 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0265573828573 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239002905897 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411136537278 0.0618886996521 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8870967742 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.