Some people prefer to live in the same place most of their life, but others like to live in different places. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Living in the same places can bring a comfortable and safety to lifestyles, whereas the frequent moving can enhance people's flexibility and adaptability skills. We need to consider both perspectives before drawing a decision. These statements summarise my own mixed feelings towards the lifestyles.
When people are living in the same place for a long, they are getting familiar with surroundings. In my opinion, people would not prefer to move, because they know the location of nearby stores, the public transportations routes, friends, families and daily paths so that they feel comfortable. Furthermore, people do not prefer to move around as they get ages. Old people tend to stay in the same place for comforts. Therefore, all these various factors would result people staying in places for a long.
In contrast, other people prefer to live in other places because they can challenge their flexibility. When people are living in other places, they have to think creatively, logically and out of their regular patterns. All the new environments and the regular lifestyle patterns are changed when people are moved to other places, so every situations face the challenges. In addition to this activity, people will learn about adaptability. Since people have to get familiar to the areas and they have to make new friends or colleagues, their adaptation skills will be improved.
In my perspective, moving to other places can provide more opportunities personally and economically. When people are move to new places, they will expand their horizons by accepting for new environments and even new cultures. Sometimes, new environments can lead to new career opportunities. When I move to Korea, I found new opportunities to become a teacher and that had developed my teaching abilities and creative thinking skills.
In conclusion, there are some advantages and disadvantages for living in the same place or moving around. However, in my perspective, the moving around places have distinctive benefits for the better opportunities in career perspectives and for the enhancement of various skills.
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238726790451 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.155533422707 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0981432360743 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0371352785146 0.0501214627716 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.053050397878 0.0437548338989 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0981432360743 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0397877984085 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.05368065206 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0450928381963 0.0326793684256 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0026525198939 0.00163938923432 162% => OK
Determiners: 0.0716180371353 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.026525198939 0.021408717616 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132625994695 0.011925033212 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2113.0 1933.35771543 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36445783133 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409638554217 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286144578313 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207831325301 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156626506024 0.137316102897 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05368065206 2.80594681477 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506024096386 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.3219338684 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4736842105 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8599391341 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.210526316 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.526315789474 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.0881420419 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.54347826087 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404261182344 0.332605444948 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129204316384 0.102741220458 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110267657704 0.0668466124924 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.568057162387 0.534860350844 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132725961854 0.148594505496 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158235025471 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641844496729 0.0742795772207 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.308775340687 0.324371583561 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109207615168 0.0638462369009 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251422023004 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569390793093 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 5.90881763527 203% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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