Nowadays families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this Explain the reasons for this and discuss any possible effects it may have on society

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , family
There is no doubt,family plays an important role in everyones li...
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Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Some
...s stand with us in ups and down of life.Some people assert that in these days famili...
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Suggestion: Here
...mber of people have become used to this.Here we discuss reasons as well as possible...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... this.Here we discuss reasons as well as possible effects on society. Before giv...
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... we discuss reasons as well as possible effects on society. Before giving any po...
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Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... well as possible effects on society. Before giving any point of view let us discuss...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...connected to our busy lifestyle because most of people are busy in their life they do not ha...
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Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ifestyle because most of people are busy in their life they do not have a so muc...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...t of people are busy in their life they do not have a so much time for their fam...
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Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...o much time for their family members as in past.Another reasons is that in present days...
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Suggestion: Another
...ime for their family members as in past.Another reasons is that in present days we live...
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Line 3, column 284, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...mily members as in past.Another reasons is that in present days we live in materi...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... reasons is that in present days we live in materialistic world which has less va...
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Line 3, column 350, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun values is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... live in materialistic world which has less values toward families.and most of peop...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ich has less values toward families.and most of people spend their free time to using internet...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Lastly
... leisure time with their family members.Lastly, in modern world,people want to privacy...
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Line 3, column 574, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , people
...r family members.Lastly, in modern world,people want to privacy in their life they do n...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , There
...nyones interference. On the flip side,There are some effects of apart from families...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
... are some effects of apart from families .firstly our parents and grandparents hav...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...s and grandparents have a more experince of real life as compared to us. some tim...
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Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...that decision become a wrong and destroy the life of person.secondly,living with ...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , living
...and destroy the life of person.secondly,living with their families people learn number...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...rtant things such as realeted to history ,culture and ethics values and so on. ...
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... ,culture and ethics values and so on. In conclusion,in this modern world peop...
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Suggestion: , in
...hics values and so on. In conclusion,in this modern world people are busy in t...
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Suggestion:
.... In conclusion,in this modern world people are busy in their life but they s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'lastly', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'in conclusion', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255737704918 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.144262295082 0.155533422707 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0983606557377 0.0946595960268 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0459016393443 0.0501214627716 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0786885245902 0.0437548338989 180% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.183606557377 0.122226691241 150% => OK
Participles: 0.0295081967213 0.0403226058552 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74678074797 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0327868852459 0.0326793684256 100% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0622950819672 0.0861772015684 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00655737704918 0.021408717616 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00327868852459 0.011925033212 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1674.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83275261324 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320557491289 0.374742101984 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216027874564 0.28420135186 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146341463415 0.203846283523 72% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0836236933798 0.137316102897 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74678074797 2.80594681477 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.3930553851 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0891783567 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.8333333333 20.7743622355 230% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 182.635109805 49.517814964 369% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.0 127.492653851 219% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.8333333333 20.7743622355 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 0.814263465372 287% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 3.99599198397 651% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 69.4361207898 49.1944974215 141% => OK
Elegance: 1.74390243902 1.69124875643 103% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458165221562 0.332605444948 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.184995493155 0.102741220458 180% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0645441107083 0.0668466124924 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.81518551897 0.534860350844 152% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192696314816 0.148594505496 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.267658789721 0.134430193775 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098226674913 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319747221516 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0862296849734 0.0638462369009 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316449281828 0.228012699653 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12061310419 0.058150111329 207% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.