Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue of whether or not money is the most important factor of a job has always been controversial. On the one hand, many people argue that money offers people the chance to maintain a decent life, thus is surely the most significant. Others, on the other hand, state that other factors also contribute greatly to the quality of a good job. Personally, I disapprove of the statement that salary is the most crucial aspect of a job.
First and foremost, working just for money can cause serious health problems. Needless to say, when one's goal in working is solely for the salary, that person is likely to get stressed out. Take my father as an example, a few years earlier, he worked in a marketing company as he was offered a great ideal of money to take over the manager position. After a while, he realized how much he disliked the job but still tried to maintain it due to the high salary. However he soon got depressed because the job was too tiring and he did not enjoy the working environment. As a result, he quitted the job and pursued his dream of opening his own company which does not earn him as much money but he is very happy with it . Indeed, if my dad had kept on staying in that marketing company just for its money, he would have faced with even more mental problems.
Secondly, working for the money only may cause one lose his morality . It is obviously, if one is too focus on making money, they might do anything accomplish their goals even if it means to harm others. For instance, when my cousin was working in at a magazine, one of coworkers even tried to messed with my cousin's work in order to get the promotion. She hacked into my cousin's computer, deleted her important files and stole her ideas. The coworker ended up achieving her goal, but she failed to be a decent human being. Had the coworker not been so competitive for the money, she would not have committed such selfish and low action.
Admittedly, money is an important aspect of a job; however, for those mentioned reasons, it is by no means not the most significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not money is the most important factor of a...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... health problems. Needless to say, when ones goal in working is solely for the salar...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... to maintain it due to the high salary. However he soon got depressed because the job w...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... much money but he is very happy with it . Indeed, if my dad had kept on staying i...
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Suggestion: .
...ney only may cause one lose his morality . It is obviously, if one is too focus on...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to focus'?
Suggestion: to focus
...s morality . It is obviously, if one is too focus on making money, they might do anything...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'focused', 'focussed'.
Suggestion: focused; focussed
...rality . It is obviously, if one is too focus on making money, they might do anything...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.192399049881 0.229887763892 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.16864608076 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083135391924 0.0866891130778 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0902612826603 0.046263068375 195% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0783847980998 0.0685040099705 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104513064133 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0403800475059 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42522268755 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261282660333 0.0309702414327 84% => OK
Particles: 0.00712589073634 0.00188951952338 377% => OK
Determiners: 0.0926365795724 0.0887237588012 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0118764845606 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00950118764846 0.0139019557991 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2069.0 2387.08602151 87% => OK
No of words: 379.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45910290237 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.287598944591 0.338922669872 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.20580474934 0.251872472559 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118733509235 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0817941952507 0.112833075102 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42522268755 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54617414248 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 61.2100008697 59.2087087015 103% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0555555556 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6324928822 48.84282405 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.944444444 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0555555556 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.644075263715 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 41.6360304896 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.0 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415485928356 0.300154397459 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112005562735 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0520403509979 0.0752933317313 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.505390347376 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.17129480083 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161777170516 0.114077575197 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943662742797 0.0781384742642 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.280071720797 0.336927656856 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.058588949121 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293350179166 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815604594429 0.0618886996521 132% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.86379928315 311% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.4623655914 447% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.