some people think that all university students should study whatever they like .other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology.
In today's scenario,education play vital role in our life.Some people deem that,all youngsters should learn whatever they like.While,other differ and believe that,they should only study subjects related to science and technology will be very helpful in the future.
On the one hand,it is essential for young people should choose their profession by own idea and thought.Nowadays,education needed to attaining better job ,live good life and earning handsome amount of money.If they do not interest in any field but parents force them to study in particular field because of that,thay cannot success in their life.Thus,students should choose their study and carrier by using own idea and experience.
On the other hand,there has been proliferation due to advancement of technology.science and technology play crucial role in our society.So,it is necessary for young people to study subjects related to technology.Science and technology goes hand to hand and it has change the scenario of world in wide horizon.In cut throat competition,we can not find our interested job.For instance,in India, majority of people choose the subject of science and technology such as engineer medical and so many.So,that's why, the opportunity of job will be alleviated.
To encapsulate,as per my point of view that,student should choose their profession and study subjects by own without help someone.It is best way to get success in our life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for instance', 'in particular', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295719844358 0.247107183377 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.136186770428 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894941634241 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0272373540856 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0661478599222 0.0437548338989 151% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128404669261 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0311284046693 0.0403226058552 77% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.65566681131 2.80594681477 130% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350194552529 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0350194552529 0.0861772015684 41% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0350194552529 0.021408717616 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00778210116732 0.011925033212 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1423.0 1933.35771543 74% => OK
No of words: 219.0 316.048096192 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.49771689498 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20517956788 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397260273973 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296803652968 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2100456621 0.203846283523 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.159817351598 0.137316102897 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65566681131 2.80594681477 130% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.037074148 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593607305936 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.3386142193 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0891783567 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 54.75 20.7743622355 264% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 146.750425894 49.517814964 296% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 355.75 127.492653851 279% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.75 20.7743622355 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.25 0.814263465372 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 3.99599198397 751% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 84.4303652968 49.1944974215 172% => OK
Elegance: 1.98305084746 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455122520794 0.332605444948 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.239253563017 0.102741220458 233% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0306681414895 0.0668466124924 46% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.48253415325e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.322105373881 0.134430193775 240% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159226772137 0.0742795772207 214% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.267064421273 0.324371583561 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0309091684985 0.0638462369009 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322105373881 0.228012699653 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159226772137 0.058150111329 274% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.68436873747 35% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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