The chart below shows the sales revenue in dollars at three branches of a bank in the first quarter of 2010.
The chart represents the amount of income made by a bank that is located in three places (Newhaven, Brighton and Seaford) in the first quarter of 2010. Units are measured in US dollars.
Overall, the amount of profit had witnessed the periodic fluctuation. Among the fluctuation, Newhaven and Brighton showed an increasing trend with its profits, whereas Seaford branch's profit declined over a period given.
Looking in details for Newhaven and Brighton located branches had made an increasing trend in its profits within three months. In January, Newhaven and Brighton had profited of about $25,000 and around $22,000 respectively, before it declined to $20,000 for Newhaven and approximately $16,000 or Brighton in February. By March, both branches increased with its profits but Newhaven branch recorded the highest sales revenue of $40,000 whereas Brighton recorded at $35,000.
In opposed to those two branches' trends, seaford branch had the highest sales revenue was in February (of around $27,000), whereas the other two months had the lowest amount of sales revenues of below $15,000 in January and about $12,000 in March.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'look', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.307692307692 0.268076937826 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.138461538462 0.116061578633 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0358974358974 0.0759168565197 47% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0307692307692 0.0366838410393 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0205128205128 0.0131127313244 156% => OK
Prepositions: 0.164102564103 0.155750635184 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0512820512821 0.0379272487307 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53945013119 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0102564102564 0.0210936926555 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0820512820513 0.0948980150116 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00512820512821 0.00967000014798 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1109.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23033707865 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.460674157303 0.337110787985 137% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337078651685 0.247514529752 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.213483146067 0.171178102325 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.061797752809 0.112407865282 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53945013119 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.546246751206 100% => OK
Word variations: 46.7731630651 49.3433353143 95% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.87056351 42.9750493124 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.625 135.714022679 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 23.0094962315 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 55.9578651685 47.7609492067 117% => OK
Elegance: 2.75675675676 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.465223866006 0.418131533498 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.207296751782 0.181151798455 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122943891446 0.0850326197045 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.695545911793 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.190139187719 0.157042692854 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231039509926 0.228904883108 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159842406164 0.108899403657 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.306381598418 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103940078029 0.0812612215331 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.340032846519 0.316326947829 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151826811143 0.0921553760075 165% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.