One of the most important duities of a person with regard to a foregin visitor, it to guide him/her in the best possible way. If a foreigner decides to visits my country for only one day I would suggest him to go to Kish Island for two important reasons.
First, it is a fun place with variety of atractions. Kish Island has both modern and ancient places which ideal for every visitor. For example, about seven years ago, one of my friends visited my country, Iran. We decided to go to Kish Island. We spend two days in that place, and had lots of fun. Since, the Island is surrounded by sea, we went and tried wave surffing. It was very exciting and intresting. Also, since my friend liked to see some of the ancient places in Iran, and a very old civilization used to live in kish about 1500 years age, we also visited The shrine of Koorosh, which has a big musiume with valiety of ancient stuff.
Second, it is a rather small place. Since, the visitor only has one day to spend in my country, I would recommand him/her to go to a small city or place. I thing it is better to visit a small city and see everything than visit a big city and not be able to visit some of the important places in that city. For example, couple of years ago, I took a week off of my job to visit china. Since china is one of the largest countries in the world, most of its cities are large too. Since generally when I visit a place I like to visit it once and for all, I had to choose a city with good atractions and also fairly small area to be able to visit all of the intresting places in it. I believe other visitors like to do the same. It is not efficent to visit a place twice when there are so many places in the earth that we have not seen yet. So, that's the second reason why I recommand Kish Island for those who have limited time to visit my country.
In sum, it is important for us to make sure the foreign visitors enjoy visiting our country. To do so, we have to guide them acording to their limitations and their intrests. A small and ancient place with lots of atractions is ideal for those who have little time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'visit'.
Suggestion: visit
...possible way. If a foreigner decides to visits my country for only one day I would sug...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ing. Also, since my friend liked to see some of the ancient places in Iran, and a very old ...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: YOU_THING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'think' or 'thinks'?
Suggestion: think; thinks
...m/her to go to a small city or place. I thing it is better to visit a small city and ...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sit a big city and not be able to visit some of the important places in that city. For exam...
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Line 5, column 642, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...o fairly small area to be able to visit all of the intresting places in it. I believe othe...
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Line 5, column 840, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...he earth that we have not seen yet. So, thats the second reason why I recommand Kish ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'with regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210989010989 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.145054945055 0.158761421928 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857142857143 0.0866891130778 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0527472527473 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0835164835165 0.0685040099705 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112087912088 0.118717715034 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0153846153846 0.0351676179071 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.20754353107 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0571428571429 0.0309702414327 185% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0857142857143 0.0887237588012 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0043956043956 0.0209618222197 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0153846153846 0.0139019557991 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2117.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 411.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15085158151 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.231143552311 0.338922669872 68% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.150851581509 0.251872472559 60% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0900243309002 0.174417080927 52% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0486618004866 0.112833075102 43% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.20754353107 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459854014599 0.524397521467 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.5772993165 59.2087087015 84% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6818181818 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2270259147 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2272727273 120.699889404 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6818181818 20.5533526081 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 33.7669763327 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.203125 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2583650078 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0853071796744 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0617234660393 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460039725926 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.164740642404 0.151897553556 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975549921878 0.114077575197 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785396707559 0.0781384742642 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395126482715 0.336927656856 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0580989340064 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191133423048 0.210909579961 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392088463129 0.0618886996521 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.