When we talk about satisfactions, we usually talk about a sense of fulfilment and self-actualisation. Most of us gain those feeling in work, some people feel more satisfied with doing similar tasks all day long, indeed, we have to admit that similar tasks are less challenging, an experienced employee can finish this kind of tasks very quickly. However, I am agreeing with the statement that people feel more satisfied with having different types of tasks to do.
Employees who are used to deal with different types of tasks are more competitive in job market than those only do similar tasks all day long. It is the fact that this kind of job requires employees with different skills, such as the communication skills with others, how to understand some knowledges in a short time and how to organize their schedule efficiently. Obviously, bosses and other team members appreciate employees who have those skills, as a result, these employees will have higher chance to get promotion in their career and receive better salaries than the average. When people gain more profit in their job, they can spend more money on entertainments and buy more things which will improve their life quality, hence they will gain more satisfaction from work.
At most of time, different types of tasks is more challenging than similar tasks, some people may not like taking challenges during their life time, they are afraid of getting out from their comfort zone. But there are some people enjoying facing with challenging in their job, they gain satisfaction from the process of doing different kinds of tasks. For those people, a job with similar tasks is often too boring to them, I would like to introduce myself as a example, as a student major in software engineering, I am going to start my career as a program developer. I have some experiences in web application development, so I choose this area and start my internship in a software company. My task is only use a specific technic to implement other's design, after finished my task before the end of the day, I find there are no other kinds of tasks for me and I have to wait my team member finished their design, otherwise I can not start my work. So I quickly feel bored to this job and leave this company as soon as that project finished. After that, I realized I am not the kind of person who can endure doing similar tasks all day long, as a consequence, I change my job as a research assistance intern in a data mining company, there are different kinds of tasks for me, such as finding data sources on the Internet, using different tools to analysis data and find their pattern in order to cluster them to different categories. Now I feel much more satisfied to my job.
In conclusion, different types of tasks is benefit for employees to enhance their competitive in job market, thus, leading a feeling of fulfillment in their work. And for those kind of people who quickly gets bored with similar tasks, a challenging job offers more kinds of tasks is a better choice towards them.
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 78
- TPO-47 - Integrated Writing Task Pterosaurs were an ancient group of winged reptiles that lived alongside the dinosaurs. Many pterosaurs were very large, some as large as a giraffe and with a wingspan of over 12 meters. Paleontologists have long wondered 80
- TPO-41 - Integrated Writing Task Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harm 73
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... kind of tasks very quickly. However, I am agreeing with the statement that people feel mor...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...not like taking challenges during their life time, they are afraid of getting out from th...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...em, I would like to introduce myself as a example, as a student major in software...
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Line 7, column 172, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...g of fulfillment in their work. And for those kind of people who quickly gets bored with s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252577319588 0.229887763892 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.151202749141 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.073883161512 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.053264604811 0.046263068375 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0807560137457 0.0685040099705 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134020618557 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0378006872852 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6680766416 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292096219931 0.0309702414327 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0807560137457 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0154639175258 0.0209618222197 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0154639175258 0.0139019557991 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3044.0 2387.08602151 128% => OK
No of words: 530.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74339622642 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294339622642 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.220754716981 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145283018868 0.174417080927 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103773584906 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6680766416 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447169811321 0.524397521467 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.9652029186 59.2087087015 88% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 31.1764705882 20.5533526081 152% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2064077588 48.84282405 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.058823529 120.699889404 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1764705882 20.5533526081 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 53.2519422863 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.48795180723 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358040844814 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150872551915 0.103427244359 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0724147788363 0.0752933317313 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.514597871277 0.497263757937 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145436925108 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147118715714 0.114077575197 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756691992263 0.0781384742642 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396595417546 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.062927577532 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254686090273 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546497111761 0.0618886996521 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Less content wanted. Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.