Friends play an important role in everyone's life. In some cases, friends could even be of greater help than your family members. The issue whether it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends has become a hot issue for people all over the world. As far as I am concerned, keeping old friends is more significant than making new friends.
To begin with, old friends have a better understanding of you. They have known you for many years and have shared happinesses and sorrows in the past years with you. For you, they are
more like your family members. I have a great friend named Joy. We have become best friends since high school. She can read what I'm thinking from my facial expressions. I will turn to her for advice whenever I'm confused. In addition, she will give me warm comfort if I feel upset. I trust her and she trust me, too. Although we may work or live in different places, this precious friendship will last forever.
The next point to be mentioned is that it's not easy to make sincere new friends in the complicated working environment. Most of my good friends were made in school, where there is much love. However, people care more about themselves and their family and have little time and energy to develop close friendship with others. The most common relationship in the society is colleague. Most people have their own circles of friends at that time.
However, we can't deny the importance of making new friends. New friends mean new ways of thinking and different life experiences. By communicating with them, you can learn something different and have various kinds of pleasure.
All in all, keeping old friends is of greater importance than making new friends.
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 70
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ds since high school. She can read what Im thinking from my facial expressions. I ...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... I will turn to her for advice whenever Im confused. In addition, she will give me...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'trusts'.
Suggestion: trusts
...rt if I feel upset. I trust her and she trust me, too. Although we may work or live i...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s of friends at that time. However, we cant deny the importance of making new frien...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'i feel', 'in addition', 'in some cases', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204142011834 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.165680473373 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.133136094675 0.0866891130778 154% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.100591715976 0.0685040099705 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121301775148 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0443786982249 0.0351676179071 126% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.48426520183 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0207100591716 0.0309702414327 67% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0532544378698 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0207100591716 0.0209618222197 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00887573964497 0.0139019557991 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1719.0 2387.08602151 72% => OK
No of words: 303.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67326732673 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300330033003 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227722772277 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13201320132 0.174417080927 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0891089108911 0.112833075102 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48426520183 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 60.4673607484 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1739130435 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6512176309 48.84282405 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7391304348 120.699889404 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1739130435 20.5533526081 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.644075263715 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 35.9461902712 45.7405998639 79% => OK
Elegance: 1.21359223301 1.45489161554 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375246366692 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893080117886 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737823264128 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.471627831346 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187423659489 0.151897553556 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107258311368 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101012200531 0.0781384742642 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.161671908241 0.336927656856 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0606414090881 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202862822522 0.210909579961 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10941320479 0.0618886996521 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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