With rapid develop of the whole society, it is become more and more important to modern people to have coherent social connections with others. It is obviously that we always meet new people and make new friends, at the same time, we need to keep in touch with those old friends. From my perspective, making new friends is definitely more important than keeping old friends.
To begin with, new friends help us widen our horizontal and we always can learn new knowledge and hear special experience from new friends. Those new friends will bring something new to our lives and maybe give us some totally expand aspects to consider events, which will play a significant role in our personal development.
In addition, imaging that when we confront difficulties, who will us turn to find help? The answer is friends. Thus, continuously making new friends enables us have more choices when difficulties come. For instance, as a student major in computer science, I rarely have opportunities to make friends with doctors. When I have to handle some healthy issues, it will e much easier if I have a doctor friend to consult with before going to hospital.
I have to point out that those successful persons share a same characteristic, having lots of friends. It cannot be denied that friends are so important if a person want to be successful in whatever field. As the richest man in China, Jackie Ma is a perfect example. He has so many friends in various field that we never imaged. We can infer that those persons helped him achieve much in those field, like music and finance market.
Admittedly, old friends always are treasures in every people's lives, they are reliable, understand your every trifle emotion and always hold your back. But new friends, widen our horizontal, give us assistants and our road to success is paved by them. If a person always stick to old friends, he or she will be restricts to the inherent circle. Since everyone is a part of the society, making new friends is an social need and inevitably.
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 70
- TPO-23 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.Use specific reasons an 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 409, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t of the society, making new friends is an social need and inevitably.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211734693878 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.165816326531 0.158761421928 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109693877551 0.0866891130778 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0612244897959 0.046263068375 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0841836734694 0.0685040099705 123% => OK
Prepositions: 0.094387755102 0.118717715034 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0255102040816 0.0351676179071 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61984420786 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0408163265306 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00255102040816 0.00188951952338 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.0612244897959 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0209618222197 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015306122449 0.0139019557991 110% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2030.0 2387.08602151 85% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348571428571 0.338922669872 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251428571429 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148571428571 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0885714285714 0.112833075102 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61984420786 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545714285714 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.5387996929 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0377610515 48.84282405 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.842105263 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.644075263715 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 43.5639097744 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.06557377049 1.45489161554 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417363765386 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0974357092829 0.103427244359 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0714489167227 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.517640721517 0.497263757937 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138757779787 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15712092836 0.114077575197 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854524628085 0.0781384742642 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.246788972996 0.336927656856 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0451616267081 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26778525877 0.210909579961 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999223166012 0.0618886996521 161% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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