The cost of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing.What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
Tourism plays a phenomenal role to entertain the people.Presently,the trend of tourism is gaining prevalence all over the world.Here,i would like to account for both merits and demerits of increasing tourism with my own perception.
There are manifold benefits of tourism.First and foremost,masses can get knowledge.For instance,individual visit various places such as historical,hillstation and recreational where they may meet with different culture people and communicate with them.As a result,they would become curious to gain knowledge and be aware.As it is said that "knowledge is invaluable power".Apart from it,state might take advantage of tourism.To give a specific example,it can collect money from tourists who visit different kinds of places,it may construct many infrastructures as museums,library and monuments.Thus,it will have good impact on the economic growth of the nation.
On the other hand,numerous points can be mentioned to shore up the cons of inclining phenomena of tourism.Some masses reckon that tourism spreads many types of pollution as air ,noise pollution and so on.In this context, tourists travel by various vehicle from one place to another place.Pollution is a major concern in front of society.Hence,people might become the victim of many ailments such as hearing impairment,respiratory problem
and asthma.
From my notion,both aspects have their own significance.Few individuals acknowledged that growing tourism has plentiful advantages.However ,it is advisable for government to promote the tourism.
To recapitulate,it is universally accepted that tourism has more pros than cons.I opine,state and people should shake hands together to enrich it.As,it is best to nurture of every country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265780730897 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.159468438538 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109634551495 0.0946595960268 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0265780730897 0.0501214627716 53% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431893687708 0.0437548338989 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116279069767 0.122226691241 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0265780730897 0.0403226058552 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 4.05380019241 2.80594681477 144% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299003322259 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00332225913621 0.00163938923432 203% => OK
Determiners: 0.063122923588 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0365448504983 0.021408717616 171% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00664451827243 0.011925033212 56% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1751.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 250.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.004 6.12580529183 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.436 0.374742101984 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.368 0.28420135186 129% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.264 0.203846283523 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.2 0.137316102897 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05380019241 2.80594681477 144% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676 0.56093040696 121% => OK
Word variations: 80.5879246004 60.7387585426 133% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.7743622355 241% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 188.141436159 49.517814964 380% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 350.2 127.492653851 275% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 20.7743622355 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.814263465372 295% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 3.99599198397 1001% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 86.8 49.1944974215 176% => OK
Elegance: 1.78260869565 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385288840035 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174764695612 0.102741220458 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0659749608183 0.0668466124924 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.85775845048e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228352377311 0.134430193775 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749737265396 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.20824684859 0.324371583561 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.061569640972 0.0638462369009 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224945179887 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725945100272 0.058150111329 125% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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