It is said that teacher will be replaced by the computer in the future. Do you agree or disagree?
Lifestyle has undergone a dramatic change over a couple of decades. Presently, smart classes play a paramount role to
uplift the standard of education. It is argued that computer will erase the teacher in upcoming years. Here, i would like to accord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, computer consumes less amount of time to provide information to the students. to give a specific example, it can show more information in just a second which is
related to various subjects such as physics, chemistry, mathematics and so on. Apart from it, it has various softwares that provide accurate information to pupils. As a result, people will be influenced by computer, automatically teacher will be erased by it in next century.
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Firstly, it enables people to get knowledge easily. For example, it provides various languages like Hindi, English and Russian which helps the student to understand the word, sentence in any module. Thence, they could enrich their grasping power and become agile in their life. On the contrary ,others have conflicting views.
They think that pupils must be taught by teachers. In addition to this , teachers may make them understand correctly. To
justify, students can make good understanding with teacher to apprehend the question. They can not only get knowledge
about study but also get lessons that is related their life. Hence, students could broaden the horizon of knowledge as it is said that knowledge is invaluable power.
To recapitulate , undeniably teacher should teach the student to provide better education. However, i strongly believe that students must be taught computers to get accurate knowledge.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a result', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239130434783 0.247107183377 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.180124223602 0.155533422707 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0683229813665 0.0946595960268 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055900621118 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0527950310559 0.0437548338989 121% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0993788819876 0.122226691241 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0341614906832 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76474162927 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0496894409938 0.0326793684256 152% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.055900621118 0.0861772015684 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0403726708075 0.021408717616 189% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0124223602484 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1934.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 283.0 316.048096192 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.83392226148 6.12580529183 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420494699647 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.339222614841 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.233215547703 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13074204947 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76474162927 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604240282686 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.0459620435 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.4761904762 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7175030543 49.517814964 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0952380952 127.492653851 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4761904762 20.7743622355 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 0.814263465372 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38877755511 205% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.3984519603 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.29032258065 1.69124875643 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300332900964 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0631095540456 0.102741220458 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0551421227617 0.0668466124924 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531049698957 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135175482135 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100033952159 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972183822385 0.0742795772207 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.128302437948 0.324371583561 40% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0483901010407 0.0638462369009 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145315941898 0.228012699653 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932596735412 0.058150111329 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.41683366733 322% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 8.0 1.9629258517 408% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.