The statement is claiming how young people can be trained for leadership in government, industry, or other fields, by means of cooperation and not competition.
The cooperation in any type of field always generate the result aggrandized and not for a particular individual.It means to bind the team together with similar interests and building a cumulative output. While competition relies on personal improvement and a feeling of better than anyone in any particular field.
The reason behind the competition and cooperation definition stated above is that both are necessary for development in any field according to the required outcome.
For example, if one have to work in a sports team than, of course, cooperation is key to beat the opponent. If team members won't cooperatee than their common goal, to win, would not be achievable. But if they don't look at the competition than it can turn out to be harmful for their aim. It's always good to prepare at your best but without knowing strength and weakness of the opponent 100 percent would not be enough.
While statement is focusing on cooperation among young people for better leadership, a healthy competition is never harmful but always a way to get motivated.
Young people surely needs to know the importance of cooperation as they mostly are rambled and desultory they don't focus on cooperation and are agressive in terms of competition. But thats because they haven't been through the similar phase. When future is concerened they need to be moulded in to a person that know how to cooperate to boost productivity and use competiton to motivate themselves.
Cooperation alone is not enough for leadership or working in any field. You need to know the all sides of the opponent and use their weakness to beat them or strenght to prepare yourself. Competition and cooperation while contrary to each other in terms go hand in hand for best way to prepare young people for leadership in any field. Only thing needs to be done is to teach them the subtleness of the cooperation and competition relationship.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 58
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229110512129 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.175202156334 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078167115903 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0404312668464 0.0497285424764 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0431266846361 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145552560647 0.12292977631 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0404312668464 0.0406280797675 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91659598265 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0566037735849 0.030933414821 183% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00269541778976 0.0016655270985 162% => OK
Determiners: 0.0835579514825 0.0997080785238 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010781671159 0.0249443105267 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010781671159 0.0148568991511 73% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2074.0 2732.02544248 76% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99421965318 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343930635838 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.265895953757 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199421965318 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150289017341 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91659598265 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 50.5695368242 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1974170067 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.625 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4375 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 48.2145953757 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.60416666667 1.64882698954 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509669488317 0.391690518653 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120649562955 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0479636805943 0.077325440228 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.658723295159 0.547984918172 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.199224825418 0.149214159877 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209034972356 0.161403998019 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125735606017 0.0892212321368 141% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.253201743168 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0982662762277 0.0692045440612 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305069459239 0.275328986314 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131240947508 0.0653680567796 201% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.