Corporations work solemnly for their profit and tend not to be benevolent toward the nation, in most cases. It is plausible as there are many instances supporting this supposition. Corporation have only one thing in mind to make money, they have only mercenary thinking, and do their best to be on the apex of the competition. But is it so?
Let's take some corporations in consideration. Apple inc., a big multinational company of the world, not only united states, have produced some of the finest products of technology, like IPhones, IPads and many others. They are at top of the chain in smartphones sector and hence, generate highest amount of profit other than any company in the same field. Once it's revenue was so much that it was estimated more than whole U.S. GDP. That's huge.
Now talk about Microsoft, as we know it as the company that made personal computers from a dream to a reality. Windows OS, a product of Microsoft, is one of the most used and widespread operation system in the world. Now you can imagine how much revenue this tech giant must be generating.
Reading above introduction and examples one might think that corporation have only one objective earn profit. But what I didn't mentioned is that what were the affects of these companies over people or the nation itself. Apple make great products and it extol the nation rank too. When someone talks about U.S. powers and domination over world they always metion Microsoft and Apple as the companies that helped U.S. grow to the culmination of technology. This is the way they support the nation to prosper.
These are just private corporations there are public corporations also whose sole purpose is to improve condition of the nation in specific fields. In India, an initiation "Digital India", has its only purpose to help India dgitize its different fields, from education to agriculture. So, it calls the claim in question.
There are many more instances to show what I am trying to convey here that it's not necessary that every coorporation is not helping nation and just completing its job to take the top position. While there might be some corporations that slur the reputation or welfare of the nation, however, not each company is just making profit where as if they won't make profit how will they survive, it's part of the sytem how they works. Not only corporation if something is working to come to the top of the chain they are implicitly or explicitly contributing to the welfare of the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...upporting this supposition. Corporation have only one thing in mind to make money, t...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ex of the competition. But is it so? Lets take some corporations in consideration...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'generate the highest'.
Suggestion: generate the highest
... chain in smartphones sector and hence, generate highest amount of profit other than any company...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her than any company in the same field. Once its revenue was so much that it was est...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...was estimated more than whole U.S. GDP. Thats huge. Now talk about Microsoft, as ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y one objective earn profit. But what I didnt mentioned is that what were the affects...
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'makes'.
Suggestion: makes
...over people or the nation itself. Apple make great products and it extol the nation ...
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Message: Did you mean 'extols'?
Suggestion: extols
...tself. Apple make great products and it extol the nation rank too. When someone talks...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... not each company is just making profit where as if they wont make profit how will they ...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...survive, its part of the sytem how they works. Not only corporation if something is w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in most cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247379454927 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.153039832285 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733752620545 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0587002096436 0.0497285424764 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0566037735849 0.0444667217837 127% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.106918238994 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0230607966457 0.0406280797675 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70330954253 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314465408805 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0901467505241 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0104821802935 0.0249443105267 42% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251572327044 0.0148568991511 169% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2510.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 429.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85081585082 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305361305361 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230769230769 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156177156177 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125874125874 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70330954253 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5337995338 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 61.5108574597 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.652173913 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0901850142 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.130434783 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.347826086957 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.72909699 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.40625 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406740547945 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0658357862363 0.123202303941 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0764337717197 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485196591468 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173947219422 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136941758811 0.161403998019 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108130173347 0.0892212321368 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245680208767 0.385218514788 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0503546005084 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249204706327 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489039224538 0.0653680567796 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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