Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone accept a simpler life, while others believe that technology can solve these problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people believe that the advance of technology would cause environmental problems. Thus, they suggest everyone in community to adopt simpler life. However, others argue that environmental problems would be settled by technology it self. I personally believe that technology would be helpful for life.
On the one hand, it is undoubted that the development of technology has caused some environmental problems. Many beneficial inventions also caused detrimental effects to the environment. For example, the invention of cars that use fossil fuel has exacerbated world condition. Air is also tain...
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I am convinced that tecnological advancement will be able to tacle them.
Description: 'them' refers to what? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Sentence: On the other hand, because of detrimental effects caused by technology, scientists concern more to invent new mechines that are not only useful for people but also are friendly for the environment.
Error: mechines Suggestion: machines
Sentence: To conclude, from my personal perspective, the use of thecnology in these day is inevitable, related to its environmental effects I am convinced that tecnological advancement will be able to tacle them.
Error: thecnology Suggestion: technology
Error: tacle Suggestion: ?
Error: tecnological Suggestion: technological
flaws:
No. of Words: 264
No. of Different Words: 147
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1393 1500
No. of Different Words: 147 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.277 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.051 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.448 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.336 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.073 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5