Many people spend large amounts of money on celebrating birthdays and weddings. Others think it is unnecessary to spend so much on these events. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
To begin with, these days, it is an undisputable fact that there is a number of people who prefer spend a lot of money on celebrating some occasions. General public believes, that it is modern trend, however, others are confident that this money can be spent on more necessary things. I tend to partly agree with these statements, therefore, the purpose of this essay is to discuss both points of view.
Those who support the idea that ladies and gentlemen can spend some earnings on celebrating some significant events, present a number of points to support their view. It is believed, that wedding is one of the most important events for some families. Some people try to pay more their attention on preparing to these memorable days. To illustrate this thought, some Ukrainian couples try to spend a lot of funds on their wedding in order to show their prosperity (достаток) and to receive unforgettable emotions about this occasion.
Nevertheless, one cannot forget about spending some money on more useful things. It can concern some journeys in foreign countries or buying some cars or some apartments instead of expensive weddings or birthdays. That is why, some women and men can earn their funds on necessary things. For instance, my husband and I spent our money on buying a car instead of a grandiose wedding. In addition, we had opportunity to order a 10-day trip to Spain and we were happy to visit this interesting area.
To sum up, both points, discussed in the essay are very debatable. While some people try to create some expensive event, others can spend their money on travelling and buying some necessary items.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: Public
...of money on celebrating some occasions. General public believes, that it is modern trend, howe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235483870968 0.247107183377 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.154838709677 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709677419355 0.0946595960268 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354838709677 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0516129032258 0.0437548338989 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109677419355 0.122226691241 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0322580645161 0.0403226058552 80% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71838699711 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0483870967742 0.0326793684256 148% => OK
Particles: 0.00322580645161 0.00163938923432 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.122580645161 0.0861772015684 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0193548387097 0.021408717616 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00967741935484 0.011925033212 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1644.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91366906475 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.334532374101 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241007194245 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169064748201 0.203846283523 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140287769784 0.137316102897 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71838699711 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525179856115 0.56093040696 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.9391050175 60.7387585426 86% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8571428571 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4630753225 49.517814964 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 127.492653851 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 43.9578622816 49.1944974215 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.56 1.69124875643 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324948874454 0.332605444948 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0952931325281 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0696010688353 0.0668466124924 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524761841506 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129577185791 0.148594505496 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134681878186 0.134430193775 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572160544964 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379573653216 0.324371583561 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.029997855986 0.0638462369009 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228558568734 0.228012699653 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424512197366 0.058150111329 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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