with the rise in modernization; The lifestyles of people have been greatly affected. They have achieved various milestones however, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever . One such issue here is of occassional expenditure. A particular topic asserts that whether people should spend money on birthdays and weddings? Through this essay, I shall explore this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
Taking one side of the argument, there are some people who believe in spending a lot on birthdays and wedding ceremonies. They further believe that if they would not spend large amount on celebrations, there high class level will not be shown to others. Moreover, they do not want to make unhappy to those guests who arrives in their family occassions. That is why, they prefer to have all types of facilities in celebrations by spending lots of money.
on the other side, there are antagonists to this assertion who believe that it is unnecessary to spend lots of money in celebrations. They also think that people just want to show off their affluency. Furthermore, it can put great effect on middle class families.people belonging to these families would also have the wish to do celebrations like wealthy people do.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I tend to believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands so it varies from person to person.Government should implement such rule which could charge interest on high expenditure
made by individuals on celebrations.
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- The diagram shows the procedure for the university entry for high school graduates. Write a report for a university or college lecturer describing the information. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12015503876 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97584477452 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62015503876 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2979773209 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218325946469 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075646382877 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622086079321 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981591915375 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670928054214 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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