What the purpose of life? That a question for which we will get variety of opinions. Some say thats its money , gold or any such materialistic gains, others posit that purpose of life is to achieve what they want and never care about anyone till the dying breath. The point is there are multiple ways to enjoy life. Although old people can enjoy their life I feel that Young ones have higher chance of enjoying the life more than anyone else. I will be substantiating my views in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, young people are filled with more energy. This can be attributed to hormones,better health etc. The young guys are usually filled with more enthusiasm and can easily participate in variety of endurance testing activities. For example sports such as football, f1 racing, athletics, skydiving how many old people would attempt do such a thing? Close to none right? Why? Because they would not possess the required enthusiasm to carry out such activities. Young ones enjoy it till they get old. On top of that its eay for teenages and young adults to find like minded people contrary to the case of elderly people. Young ones can plan and execute a foreign trip or road trips quite easily. For instance, they can easily find several trekking groups on facebook who will be planning such events every week. Which is not at all the case when it comes to elderly ones.
Secondly, young ones usually will be earning a good salary , or arranging funds is not a complex issue for them. For example, one of my friend dying to go for october fest which happens in europe. He did not possess enough money for the expenditure of the entire trip. He contacted several friends with thier help he was able to accumulate an amount with which was able to attend the fest. On the other hand , this is quite a challenge for the older people because they would either be relying on thier retirement money , or collecting wealth for their retirement. It doesnt make much sense for them to spend money on the extravagant trips. If they do thier future living would be in a great danger. Arranging funds from thier friends is not feasible option for them because someday they would have to repay it by hurting their retirement share.
Thirdly, its not that older people dont enjoy their life. For example,my grandfather has his group of freinds. They all keep saving small amount of money and go on a trip to holy place such as Kashi,Haridwar etc. But they see it more as a duty rather than time to have fun.Its opposite in case of young people.
Finally, I would conclude by saying that its posible for old people to enjoy life , but the rate at which they do is lower than that of young people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'such as', 'on the other hand', 'on top of that']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235849056604 0.229887763892 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.160377358491 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943396226415 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490566037736 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0698113207547 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122641509434 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0377358490566 0.0351676179071 107% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.37261299472 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301886792453 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00377358490566 0.00188951952338 200% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641509433962 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0283018867925 0.0209618222197 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0188679245283 0.0139019557991 136% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2700.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 483.0 408.028673835 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5900621118 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48200974243 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.277432712215 0.338922669872 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.188405797101 0.251872472559 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103519668737 0.174417080927 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0662525879917 0.112833075102 59% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37261299472 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 58.6326734838 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6684587814 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5806451613 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3071454261 48.84282405 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0967741935 120.699889404 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5806451613 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.548387096774 0.644075263715 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.54480286738 343% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.4212248714 45.7405998639 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.41891891892 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204849131436 0.300154397459 68% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0643809471106 0.103427244359 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0625174042079 0.0752933317313 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.39643165757 0.497263757937 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167531857816 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644359923491 0.114077575197 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818816757926 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288490792526 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0430457087642 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164200964619 0.210909579961 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687060483345 0.0618886996521 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.