To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
If one want´s to understand society, firstly seems ok to look to the major cities. But, if we look deeper, we can see that it´s not right. We are all part of a big group, with different religions, cultures, places and ways of living, that, when added, result in what we call society.
First of all, if we characterize a society by means of crowds, it´s not always true that the most part of the population is in the major cities. For exemple, most part of the African countries have more than a half of their population living in the rural areas. So, if we would take this into account, what should we conclude about it´s society? People in Africa are dancing, speaking their own lenguage, paying their bills and trying to live in community as much as anyone who lives in New York, so we should definitely take their characteristics in account when trying to understand society.
Nonetheless it´s very reasonable to understand why one could think that it´s enough to study only the major cities to understand the hole society. The picture we see in tv, for exemple, is that everything happens in these places. These major cities are normaly the stages of the main political e economical events in the world, thus we forget that different places may even exist and be part of the same society.
In short, it´s not enough to study only the major cities if one wants to understand the characteristics of a society, even if it´s only the most importante ones, because everyone, everywhere, has it´s importance and should be taken in account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nonetheless,
...t when trying to understand society. Nonetheless it's very reasonable to understand...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'in short', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.183673469388 0.240241500013 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.151603498542 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0758017492711 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.064139941691 0.0497285424764 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0728862973761 0.0444667217837 164% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.128279883382 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0204081632653 0.0406280797675 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70177738541 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0291545189504 0.030933414821 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0728862973761 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0204081632653 0.0249443105267 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174927113703 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1592.0 2732.02544248 58% => OK
No of words: 271.0 452.878318584 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87453874539 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339483394834 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.236162361624 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184501845018 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132841328413 0.132149295362 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70177738541 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 52.3849590973 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 24.6363636364 23.380412469 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3919983479 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.727272727 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 23.380412469 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.674092028746 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 48.2525997987 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.15151515152 1.64882698954 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378999599513 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.163708017068 0.123202303941 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0947137093663 0.077325440228 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.591330609028 0.547984918172 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155713798764 0.149214159877 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186204914453 0.161403998019 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101528143944 0.0892212321368 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.432187899607 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0325176331164 0.0692045440612 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285813500944 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665510435713 0.0653680567796 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.