You have lost an item on a train.Write a letter to the railway company.In your letter
Describe the item.
Explain where and when you left it.
Say what action you would like the company to take.
Dear sir/Madam,
I am Writing to complain about my item which is lost in the train.It is a laptop, Brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.Furthermore it is black color one which I had put on my backpack.
Actually, I went from Kandy to Colombo on 15th of October in this year and also I booked intercity train,1st class ticket which is departure at 5.00 PM. In addition, my ticket number is TKC000789.Moreover I already put my backpack to the cupboard that is top of the my seat,my seat number is 070 and also, last time i saw it at Gampola station because I took my pen from side pocket in bag but I can not say what is the actual place it is lost.
Finally,I would like to say please check CCTV camera videos in the train and every station after pass Gampola one.Because my laptop data is very important to the government in Sri Lanka. Therefore I need to find it as soon as possible.
I am looking forward your response as soon as possible.
Thanks,
Your Faithfully
Mohan
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It is a laptop, Brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.
It is a laptop. The brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.
Furthermore it is black color one
Furthermore it is a black color one
which is departure at 5.00 PM
Definitions of departure
noun
the action of leaving, typically to start a journey.
the day of departure
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. Essay e-grader is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 191 250
No. of Characters: 767 1000
No. of Different Words: 118 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.718 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.016 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.212 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 44 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 31 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 18 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 8 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.222 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.674 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.556 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.878 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.134 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/Madam, I am Writing to complain about my item w...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...bout my item which is lost in the train.It is a laptop, Brand name is Dell and siz...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'inch' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'inches'.
Suggestion: inches
...ptop, Brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.Furthermore it is black color one which...
^^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
... Brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.Furthermore it is black color one which I had put o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... Brand name is Dell and size is 15 inch.Furthermore it is black color one which I had put o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one which I had put on my backpack. Actually, I went from Kandy to Colombo o...
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Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...addition, my ticket number is TKC000789.Moreover I already put my backpack to the cupboa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...addition, my ticket number is TKC000789.Moreover I already put my backpack to the cupboa...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'my'?
Suggestion: the; my
...backpack to the cupboard that is top of the my seat,my seat number is 070 and also, la...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
... the cupboard that is top of the my seat,my seat number is 070 and also, last time ...
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Line 5, column 324, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... seat number is 070 and also, last time i saw it at Gampola station because I too...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...what is the actual place it is lost. Finally,I would like to say please check...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...tual place it is lost. Finally,I would like to say please check CCTV cam...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...nd every station after pass Gampola one.Because my laptop data is very important to the...
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Line 7, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd every station after pass Gampola one.Because my laptop data is very important to the...
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Line 7, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...portant to the government in Sri Lanka. Therefore I need to find it as soon as possible. ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need to find it as soon as possible. I am looking forward your response as so...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281407035176 0.220444632235 128% => OK
Verbs: 0.165829145729 0.167888034529 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0452261306533 0.0606518309736 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603015075377 0.0506257000042 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.115577889447 0.118615021944 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100502512563 0.107062808482 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0251256281407 0.041066498444 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71050369904 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301507537688 0.0385302599488 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0452261306533 0.0714148451538 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0100502512563 0.0191574576366 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0251256281407 0.00930345855455 270% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1018.0 1141.60824742 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.134020619 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56284153005 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.262295081967 0.284621296913 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.196721311475 0.211203875043 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120218579235 0.133321485273 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0928961748634 0.0843313296314 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71050369904 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639344262295 0.622163163488 103% => OK
Word variations: 63.2396866833 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 12.9587628866 54% => OK
Sentence length: 26.1428571429 16.4300151701 159% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.5394265229 44.7399317507 202% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.428571429 90.9928171075 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.4300151701 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.613754768223 233% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.09278350515 812% => OK
Readability: 45.8149882904 37.5504026743 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.19117647059 1.13073093955 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22828421673 0.331212695627 69% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.21952977857 0.0927372745006 237% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.147396519152 0.0736520305886 200% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.770950624714 0.579516596996 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.227825960448 0.180689518051 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10524713434 0.122183219658 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689563264288 0.0765303033291 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290994365993 0.211926503985 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122044202357 0.0737400523855 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140494687599 0.203819188451 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768958168289 0.067151250289 115% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.45360824742 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.48453608247 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 4.73195876289 21% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 8.32989690722 72% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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