Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
describe the item
explain where and when you left it
say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing to enquire an item that is lost at the Bandra station.
To start with, it is a green colour folder of brand Classmate and Jenelia was written as label on the front side pocket. Also , the handle of the folder was of brown colour. Moreover, all my personal documents including reports, and certificates were in that folder.
I am certain that I left my item at the Bandra station as I boarded a ladies special train at 6:30 p.m and got down around 7:00 p.m. Although it was the last stop, there was rush and I kept it on the shelf near the door and somehow forgot to take again. If it is intact, It should be in the 2nd class compartment which is next to the 1st class Gents boogie.
My original and important documents are in the bag. Therefore, I request you to kindly look for the folder and please send it to the enclosed address and contact details below or I can visit your office to collect my personal item. Kindly let me know.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Thanking you in anticipation
Yours sincerely,
Jenelia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... as label on the front side pocket. Also , the handle of the folder was of brown c...
^^
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my personal documents including reports, and certificates were in that folder. ...
^^
Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lady' or simply 'ladies'?
Suggestion: a lady; ladies
...item at the Bandra station as I boarded a ladies special train at 6:30 p.m and got down ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...ly let me know. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Thanking you in antic...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41904761905 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33881334069 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638095238095 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1353814346 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13970782335 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474406029195 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529439398634 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823955678668 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557918150404 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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