The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for the younger drivers and to lower age limit for the aged ones. Do you agree?
The reason behind the significant leap in the number of traffic accidents all over the world, has recently become one of the major debatable subjects. There is a strong belief that the age factor of the vehichles' drivers, is greatly related to the appearance of this phenomenon. On the other side of the picture, there is another contradictory valid concern, claiming that this obvious rise in the number of accidents, is due to many other factors, and has probably nothing to do with the age of the driver.
The opponents of the opinion relating the age to the number of accidents, think that ot...
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Sentence: There is a strong belief that the age factor of the vehichles' drivers, is greatly related to the appearance of this phenomenon.
Error: vehichles Suggestion: vehicles
Sentence: According to them, the innappropriatness of the streets and the high ways to serve the increasing number of vehichles circulating on daily basis, is one of the primary causes of the increasing traffic danger.
Error: vehichles Suggestion: vehicles
Error: innappropriatness Suggestion: inappropriateness
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