The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
To start with, it is well-known fact that last 50 years world clime start to change. What is more, every year polution of atmosphere raise up which lead to a global warming. However, some people believe, that raising up price for fuel will solve this issue. A am partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, it seems like increase price of fuel might solve pollution problems, but the fact is even if the price for oil grow up, it leads for bigger demand and world economic produce even more things. For example, the industrial countries like China, the USA or Germany produce the million of vehicles every year. What is more, a huge number of people from around the world buying more and more those machines every year. Moreover, from 2000 -2008 year the price for oil was extremely grow up. To say more, in 2008 when price for fuel was the biggest in world history, statistic says this year also was as a record of buying a lot of new vehicles' and traveling.
On the other hand, there is a lot of alternatives energies discovered, like solar, wind, water and others. What is more, using them can very easy solve a lot of environmental problems. For example, in the USA the "Tesla Motors" company launched to produce electric cars. In fact, every year more and more people start using this vehicles, which is a big step to provide clean world.
In conclusion, as we can see above, there is so much dependence of world industries on fuel, but 21th century is a century of clear energy.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'to start with', 'what is more', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258785942492 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.124600638978 0.155533422707 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0926517571885 0.0946595960268 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0447284345048 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0159744408946 0.0437548338989 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124600638978 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0159744408946 0.0403226058552 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.37997198786 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191693290735 0.0326793684256 59% => OK
Particles: 0.00638977635783 0.00163938923432 390% => OK
Determiners: 0.0990415335463 0.0861772015684 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127795527157 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191693290735 0.011925033212 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1517.0 1933.35771543 78% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63940520446 6.12580529183 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.252788104089 0.374742101984 67% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.189591078067 0.28420135186 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.133828996283 0.203846283523 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0780669144981 0.137316102897 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37997198786 2.80594681477 85% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 55.1364025684 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.353380041 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.357142857 127.492653851 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.814263465372 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 3.99599198397 225% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 38.173393521 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 2.15517241379 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377594696593 0.332605444948 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101506526975 0.102741220458 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735388546608 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530288055779 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158574379031 0.148594505496 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141786706286 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664256113067 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.27424608274 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.114633240411 0.0638462369009 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22951960219 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852336834824 0.058150111329 147% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.