Some people think the best way to solve the global environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Rise in the ecological hurdles is raising eyebrows of many environmental scientists around the world. Many individuals consider increasing petrol price can limit the world environmental difficulties and this is the finest way to do that. In my opinion, enhancing the cost of motor vehicle oil is one way to solve ecological problems, however there are other ways also which can help to curb environmental problems.
On the one side, heavy taxes and other currency charges on fuel can limit the issues of environment. The economical class of youth will be effected with increase in price of fuel. It will persuade daily commuters to take public transport instead of using their own vehicles. In addition to that, it will force individuals to look for an alternative to fuel motor cars such as electric cars. For instance, the Indian government is working on the model of electric vehicles by introducing charging points on highways to limit the emission of transport vehicles in environment.
On the other side, plantation and protection of environment can leads to minimizing environmental problems. Industrialization and development of cities has decrease the plants level in urban regions, therefore, growing plants around the cities and especially on constructions near the highways can minimize such problems by improving the quality of air. Various nations are working on green buildings these days. Those buildings are covered with small plants which can take up the pollution and convert it in to pure oxygen and makes the environment healthier.
In conclusion, Fuel price is one way to curb such issues, however, other ways like increasing number of trees are also equally effective way to deal these environmental obstacles.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30072463768 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01001923848 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557971014493 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9874540473 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168806887649 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057184125645 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526167453712 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109178092676 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579596275109 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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