Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. Recently another anthropologist, Dr. Karp, visited the group of islands that includes Tertia and used the interview-centered method to study child-rearing practices. In the interviews that Dr. Karp conducted with children living in this group of islands, the children spent much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. Dr. Karp decided that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture must be invalid. Some anthropologists recommend that to obtain accurate information on Tertian child-rearing practices, future research on the subject should be conducted via the interview-centered method.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The anthropologists have concluded that, in order to obtain accurate information on the tertian rearing practices, future research must be conducted using the the interview centered method.They have concluded this based on Dr.Karp's study ,who found this method as more accurate.However the argument is highly flawed as it is filled with assumptions.
First of all, the argument assumes that the results of Dr.Karp's interview centered method are accurate.Children speaking more about their biological parents rather than about other adults doesn't necessarily mean that the results are correct or accurate.Dr.Field's conclusion based on observation centric method might also be accurate.It is wrong to jump to a conclusion based on the results of an observation or experiment.
Even if we were to assume that the technique worked in Tertian areas,it is impossible to say that the the same technique would provide accurate results in all future testing.Different demographics have different people and conditions and the results would definitely vary.
Moreover the observation-centric method testing was done by Dr.Fields around twenty years back, while Dr.Karp conducted his testing only recently.A lot can change in the span of twenty years and hence comparing two different testing methods with twenty years difference weakens the argument by the author.
Overall it is impossible to say that the interview centric method is the right method of testing for future cases.The results from the testing may not have been accurate or thos technique may not work in other areas.Observation-centric method might also work as it was used 20 years back.The argument would be stronger if the anthropologists conclude that for testing in tertian areas at the current time , the interview centric method seems to provide better results.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236301369863 0.25644967241 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.208904109589 0.15541462614 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109589041096 0.0836205057962 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547945205479 0.0520304965353 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0239726027397 0.0272364105082 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140410958904 0.125424944231 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0650684931507 0.0416121511921 156% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.35410006483 2.79052419416 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239726027397 0.026700313972 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0958904109589 0.113004496875 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0308219178082 0.0255425247493 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00342465753425 0.0127820249294 27% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1832.0 2731.13054187 67% => OK
No of words: 280.0 446.07635468 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.54285714286 6.12365571057 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.57801047555 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425 0.378187486979 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328571428571 0.287650121315 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221428571429 0.208842608468 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153571428571 0.135150697306 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35410006483 2.79052419416 120% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 207.018472906 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.469332199767 113% => OK
Word variations: 53.0983835123 52.1807786196 102% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 56.0 23.2022227129 241% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5903574864 57.7814097925 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 366.4 141.986410481 258% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.0 23.2022227129 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.724660767414 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 3.58251231527 698% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 88.8571428571 51.9672348444 171% => OK
Elegance: 1.53571428571 1.8405768891 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235551571852 0.441005458295 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.248742012296 0.135418324435 184% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0495085086156 0.0829849096947 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 2.9790409839e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153784610866 0.193483328276 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275031160788 0.0970749176394 28% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.2770319287 0.42659136922 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0559028477489 0.0774707102158 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153784610866 0.312017818177 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275031160788 0.0698173142475 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.33743842365 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.87684729064 44% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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