People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Risk is an important part of the success, to be very precise, results. One has to take risk to grow and flourish. The possibilities of both type of results will always be there. One has to consider all amount of consequences of the doing. Although, consequences always helps to understand the situation and provides possible outcomes incase of failure. Sometimes, it requires to undermine the consequences to get the exception results.
Growth is resulted from the progress and for doing any work for it, one needs to take challenges forthcoming. Risk or Challenges can not be undermine but, we can't leave the process because of its factor. The consequences of any risk should be examined carefully before taking up anything but sometimes there can be an exception. If we look at some present scenario, The Surgical Strike conducted by Indian Army in Pakistan Occupied Kashmir was a successful operations. The civilians are aware with the results but army generals would have considered all the risks before conducting the operation. The Prime Minister and the President would have also considered the situation as critical and forecasted all the International and Political consequences of this action. If it ended up as failure, there would be chaos of questions that could't be answered. Sometimes, there can be exception for the consideration of risk part.
Furthermore, if History is overlooked, in WW2, US dropped the nuclear bombs on Hiroshima and Nagasaki in Japan. It was an answer to the Pearl Harbour attack where Japan bombarded the city on an usual day. If we look at ir from US prospective, there was dire need of attack back on Japan. Pearl Harbour was considered as one the most important and safest place in US and Japan took the risk to the attack on it. Japanese considered all the risk factors but not on longer terms that resulted it both of its important cities. Similarly, When US attacked them back, Japan was aware and prepared for it. So, there was a considerable amount of risk and its consequences. To the exception of it, US conducted the strike that is still remembered as one of the significant answer in the world war history.
The consequences provides limpid picture of the results and decisions can be taken based on it. When I filled up my form of GRE, I considered all sorts of consequences, and after extensive research, I prepared my self to take the exam. I can't afford any failure here, so the views regarding the results were parochial to me. I haven't considered any exception part and believed in the preparation. So It all depends on the situation, about the consequences of any risk.
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- In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 58
- Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized. 50
- Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents. 41
- Compare and contrast the way of your life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for the next generations? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...ituation and provides possible outcomes incase of failure. Sometimes, it requires to unde...
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Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'undermining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: undermining
...case of failure. Sometimes, it requires to undermine the consequences to get the exception r...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...Challenges can not be undermine but, we cant leave the process because of its factor...
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Line 4, column 458, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'operation'?
Suggestion: operation
...istan Occupied Kashmir was a successful operations. The civilians are aware with the resul...
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Line 6, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ttack where Japan bombarded the city on an usual day. If we look at ir from US pro...
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Message: You should probably use 'provide'.
Suggestion: provide
... world war history. The consequences provides limpid picture of the results and decis...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... I prepared my self to take the exam. I cant afford any failure here, so the views r...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ing the results were parochial to me. I havent considered any exception part and belie...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241935483871 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.157258064516 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0564516129032 0.0880659088768 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342741935484 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0524193548387 0.0444667217837 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118951612903 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0403225806452 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90788157692 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0262096774194 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.00806451612903 0.0016655270985 484% => OK
Determiners: 0.112903225806 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0181451612903 0.0249443105267 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0120967741935 0.0148568991511 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2637.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 447.0 452.878318584 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89932885906 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331096196868 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266219239374 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221476510067 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.154362416107 0.132149295362 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90788157692 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48322147651 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 54.2001868415 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5555555556 23.380412469 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4329117876 59.4972553346 49% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 23.380412469 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.37037037037 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 43.1774794929 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.64462809917 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698434113526 0.391690518653 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10703025862 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0636390609284 0.077325440228 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494362261832 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110749046342 0.149214159877 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294284289937 0.161403998019 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340213033946 0.0892212321368 38% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.461470342528 0.385218514788 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.013705183575 0.0692045440612 20% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0534664780987 0.275328986314 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208246117265 0.0653680567796 32% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.30420353982 302% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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