The world is a challenging place hosting billions of humans fighting for their profits every day, despite all the advances in technology and human rights. News companies broadcast multitudinous numbers of events happening across the world every day where most of them are unlikely to have an effect on our daily life. Germane to this fact, a question that is matter of debate, a controversial one, is whether it is necessary for us to follow all these news or not. Although, it might not be accepted by some complacent persons, but I am personally on the belief that being aware of world events is probably a requirement in modern life.
One compelling reason deserving to be mentioned is that we are all human and we have to be supportive for each other. Generally speaking, when people believe that they are all from kind and equal to one another, they will show more sympathy with each other and as a result, the conflicts over the world will be solved peacefully. One important way to achieve that goal is being aware of how people suffers every day all over the world. Thus, people will have a better sense of humanity and they will avoid more flights in the world.
Another reason substantiating my stance which is equally important, if not more, is that being aware of the happenings in the world can give us the power of prediction. Psychologically speaking, people perform similarly in the same situations, in spite of their race, religion or place of birth. Consequently, we will be ready to deal with the similar situations and disputes, it it will be necessary because we do not know what the future holds. Something that is unlikely to happen for us now, have the possibility of becoming our major concern later in the life.
To recapitulate, not only due to humanity and altruism, but also because of our own benefit in the future, people should be aware of world's conflicts. Even though some people might argue that they will get upset or unhappy by seeing or hearing about the world crises, I, personally, prefer to aware of what going on around the world, because I am a human and i have responsibilities about other people in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...er it is necessary for us to follow all these news or not. Although, it might not be accep...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: it
...th the similar situations and disputes, it it will be necessary because we do not kno...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197115384615 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.151442307692 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0913461538462 0.0866891130778 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456730769231 0.046263068375 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0600961538462 0.0685040099705 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134615384615 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0408653846154 0.0351676179071 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69388959289 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0288461538462 0.0309702414327 93% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105769230769 0.0887237588012 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0264423076923 0.0209618222197 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0168269230769 0.0139019557991 121% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2162.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 377.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73474801061 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.310344827586 0.338922669872 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214854111406 0.251872472559 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145888594164 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106100795756 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69388959289 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522546419098 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.135582476 59.2087087015 96% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 26.9285714286 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7899473222 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.428571429 120.699889404 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9285714286 20.5533526081 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.644075263715 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 48.4139825692 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.44859813084 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343498673272 0.300154397459 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114876857224 0.103427244359 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499279132854 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.578725826652 0.497263757937 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0997515459905 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151961920237 0.114077575197 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562047430391 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382399466903 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330852646896 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242375588149 0.210909579961 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414068926928 0.0618886996521 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.