Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statements asks for equal amount of investment in both arts and military. Military is the strength of a nation, an armor that protects it from outside world's attack. On the other hand, art is the essence of a nation, which represent the culture of a nation. While both of them are important for development of a nation, there is no doubt that military is cardinal to a country.
A powerful military is defined by the number, capability and weapons owned by a country. These figures are project the reputation and status a country hold against rest of the world. For instance, consider tumult between India and Pakistan. If India didn't have a colossal military back up, then Pakistan would not think twice to attack India. Although, India is strong enough not to worry about Pakistan, there is some risk of China allying with Pakistan to attack India. China is second largest military in the world and India comes after that(third largest). That is why, strong military is by far most crucial to a country, had India been not strong military power, it would have been won over by Pakistan already.
If a country has a powerful military back up, then it can think about investing money on arts. Arts are important to preserve the culture and essence of a country, if art culture is lost then soul of a country is lost. In that case, military will be protecting a dead country. For instance, India being most diverse country in the world has an eclectic culture. World wide tourists are attracted to visit India for this matter. Yoga being one of the primary attraction world over, now if Yoga culture gets moribund in India due to lack of investment, then it will be a huge loss to what India resembles and stand for. Therefore, it is important to preserve the art culture of country too, but not at the cost of its military power. No military power means no protection.
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- Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'third', 'while', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242744063325 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.145118733509 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108179419525 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501319261214 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0184696569921 0.0444667217837 42% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126649076517 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0369393139842 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50002119227 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0263852242744 0.030933414821 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.11345646438 0.0997080785238 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0131926121372 0.0249443105267 53% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0105540897098 0.0148568991511 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1888.0 2732.02544248 69% => OK
No of words: 333.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66966966967 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315315315315 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27027027027 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174174174174 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0750750750751 0.132149295362 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50002119227 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 219.290929204 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 50.4774456596 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5263157895 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7137084053 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3684210526 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.578947368421 0.674092028746 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 44.5533428165 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.9012345679 1.64882698954 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241617664607 0.391690518653 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130070494711 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0626599426522 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462090717701 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145129210114 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106359717443 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758969507756 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36413981473 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0504229459076 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196685151017 0.275328986314 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256347855522 0.0653680567796 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.