The issue of whether or not people enjoy the same program equally between live performance and a television show is a contentious one. While each has its perks to enjoy and associated hassles to consider, I believe that watching the same program on television is much enjoyable considering its convenience and ready availability. Furthermore, it is the less costlier way as well.
First and foremost, television is better for its conveniences, this is a box inside your living room which you can turn on with single press of a button. Whereas, if you want to enjoy this live, starting from planning of the event, purchasing the tickets finally the arranging transportation to the venue has its own hassle, which may qudraple once you are married and you have your own kids with you. Moreover managing small kids in such a public place is not a easy task. which overall may jeopardizes your whole experience. On the other hand you can enjoy the same program sitting on your couch while your kids are playing or enjoying with you, with far less attention required from you.
Furthermore, some of us may argue the experience of enjoying live in a group is better than watching the show alone. But if you carefully consider the group you mostly enjoy with, is consist of your near ones. To enjoy altogether you can rather arrange a party at home where your friends will bring up their families and enjoy the whole program in more comfortable way. This way your kids can make new friends which you know to be good people. This is actually from my own experience when we watched the last world cup final together at my friends house. After the program we attended dinner had informal gossiping about our life. This is the experience you can have only at your home with level of privacy it provides.
Finally, watching in television can save you a lot of money, which is a concern for many people today imposed by the treacherous economic condition worldwide. you can save in terms avoiding tickets, transportation and even costly meals in a high street restaurant. This more true when you are in charge of a family. Added, for popular events, costing part becomes more vivid, as I said above, the world cup final, where the ticket price was so high actually we three friends and our families enjoyed the game at home for just the price of one ticket. this is no doubt a considerable point behind enjoying your favorite shows on television.
Essentially these are the reasons, worldwide a lot many people enjoy live events on television rather than live actually. I believe the convenience, comfortable privacy and affordability are the strong arguments for watching on television.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue of whether or not people enjoy the same program equally b...
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Line 1, column 354, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less costly'?
Suggestion: less costly
...dy availability. Furthermore, it is the less costlier way as well. First and foremost, tel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ed and you have your own kids with you. Moreover managing small kids in such a public pl...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...mall kids in such a public place is not a easy task. which overall may jeopardize...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...such a public place is not a easy task. which overall may jeopardizes your whole expe...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...such a public place is not a easy task. which overall may jeopardizes your whole expe...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
...der the group you mostly enjoy with, is consist of your near ones. To enjoy altogether ...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cup final together at my friends house. After the program we attended dinner had info...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...eacherous economic condition worldwide. you can save in terms avoiding tickets, tra...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... home for just the price of one ticket. this is no doubt a considerable point behind...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'no doubt', 'you know', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212723658052 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.151093439364 0.158761421928 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10337972167 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0596421471173 0.046263068375 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0874751491054 0.0685040099705 128% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117296222664 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0417495029821 0.0351676179071 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65795787695 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0119284294235 0.0309702414327 39% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00198807157058 0.00188951952338 105% => OK
Determiners: 0.0994035785288 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0218687872763 0.0209618222197 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0178926441352 0.0139019557991 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2683.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 460.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83260869565 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30652173913 0.338922669872 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245652173913 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163043478261 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65795787695 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517391304348 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 60.0612017673 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.9090909091 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3864348668 48.84282405 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.954545455 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 20.5533526081 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 0.644075263715 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.4743083004 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.24666666667 1.45489161554 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325617261016 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0873738120968 0.103427244359 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577476624288 0.0752933317313 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482525104963 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167162764402 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116407285432 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646809657831 0.0781384742642 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.355913420579 0.336927656856 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0960356070088 0.067059652881 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219823385253 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300209819912 0.0618886996521 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.