People listen to music for different reasons and at different times.
Why is music important to many people?
Music has been taking a noticeable part in life and there are various kinds of music in the whole world. People due to their taste in music and their deep felling pick a favorite kind of music and surprisingly people’s taste changes in different situations. In my opinion, music is life with every aspects of it therefore people can show their emotions such as, sadness and happiness by music. They can impress each other and say whatever cannot be expressed by words.
One reason why music is vital for people is because they can relax themselves by listing to it and also they can see their feelings in something exterior so they find themselves heard. People listen to different kinds even in different climates for example, the type of music I usually listen in rainy days is far different from the one in sunny days and it changes my mood in order to match me with the weather.
Importance of music can simply because of cultures, people believe that traditional or country music can express the culture which they came from and people can hand the traditions by music to future generations. Also it is obvious that by music people could introduce their culture to the whole world. An example of these is some traditional music of Iran which expresses the problems or concerns in society and surly it will be saved for history.
To sum up, music has been influencing significantly since the beginning of our lives so ignoring music is impossible. As it is an international, honest and effective way to communicate and while it’s a wonderful material for us to express our true feelings, it seems essential to consider the importance of music in life.
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