Reliable and authentic source of information is a fundamental prerequisite for research in any domain. In this case some people rely primarily on printed material like books, journals etc and others prefer internet for their specific content needs. This preferences may vary with the area the research being conducted. However being from an Information Technology background and considering the nature of my work I do prefer internet based contents for my research.
First internet is vast which is also readily available and easily searchable. These three qualities of internet based materials make the research possible to be done in lot less time and with significantly decreased effort and cost. As a result internet is being used as main source of information in the research community. For example, as part of a project during my undergraduate years, we required to make an estimation for computation power of a micro computer to solve a particular problem with a domestic data set. During the initial phase we collected some books, unfortunately, with backdated data considered useless with respect to contemporary hardware dynamics. As many other groups in foreign universities were working on the same problem, their research websites and draft papers published on the internet saved us and finally we could prepare the proportionate estimate and submit the assignment on time.
Secondly complain about the authenticity and correctness of the internet based content is common to all. People argue this due to the open and unregulated nature of publishing adopted by most of the websites today. Nevertheless we are the savior for ourselves here. As most of the open content sharing platform provides a mechanism for content review and rating system. Moreover, contents liked by most of the users are given higher priority than others, this way the right information comes to top very quickly. Anomalies can be found in very recent content, which is neither covered in any printed media as well. Furthermore, there are few platforms ensuring strict reviewing and moderation like online communities IEEE, ICSE and many more. These sites are mainly used by the researchers to publish their works. A panel of specialised group of people moderates the content before publishing. Although these are online communities, people can trust their authenticity resulted by the process known to people.
In conclusion today's dynamic world demands new research every day, required to be catered correctly along with better utilisation of time and budget. And I believe this contradicting requirements can only be served by using information available over the internet. And every research work published on internet will enrich it and initiate a perpetual effect on human advancement which otherwise would have been far more delayed with the decades old printing industry along with its bureaucratic process of publishing.
- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.(REWRITE) 70
- TPO-03 - Integrated Writing Task Rembrandt is the most famous of the seventeenth-century Dutch painters. However, there are doubts whether some paintings attributed to Rembrandt were actually painted by him. One such painting is known as attributed to Rem 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
- TPO-03 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 87
- TPO-08 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... the area the research being conducted. However being from an Information Technology ba...
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... adopted by most of the websites today. Nevertheless we are the savior for ourselves here. A...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'with respect to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273279352227 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.153846153846 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103238866397 0.0866891130778 119% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0465587044534 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0323886639676 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135627530364 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0668016194332 0.0351676179071 190% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.90303036262 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0202429149798 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.101214574899 0.0887237588012 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0141700404858 0.0209618222197 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00607287449393 0.0139019557991 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2922.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 458.0 408.028673835 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.37991266376 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.417030567686 0.338922669872 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.327510917031 0.251872472559 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.248908296943 0.174417080927 143% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150655021834 0.112833075102 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90303036262 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 71.1573574864 59.2087087015 120% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9130434783 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4996209909 48.84282405 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.043478261 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9130434783 20.5533526081 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.782608695652 0.644075263715 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 52.6641351813 45.7405998639 115% => OK
Elegance: 2.04347826087 1.45489161554 140% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333212317821 0.300154397459 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0696024793743 0.103427244359 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0425978787717 0.0752933317313 57% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.450306488024 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119884047335 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114827884339 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453352578346 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330734123787 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0637542310205 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223783814719 0.210909579961 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445446953016 0.0618886996521 72% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.91756272401 183% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.