How do movies and television influence people's behavior.? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no doubt that movies or television programs are conventional in the world and I cannot imagine the world without celebrities or Hollywood. When we feel like gloomy we want to watch comedy movies or when we come back home from company we unconsciously turn on the TV. So Television programs or movies integrate to man life therefore, we are influenced in some way. Which will be explored in below

First, it is alleged that the TV programs reach people and affect in some way. When we watch the TV we always encounter with commercials and they try to convince us to buy their products even we hate that products. I want to give clear example about commercials. I do not anyone who did not drink Coca Cola. When I was in Afghanistan where is against the American culture, we were watching television and we saw people who were drinking Coca Cola in Afghanistan local movies Shaaba. Furthermore, it is not only about advertisement power, people behave unconsciously like celebrities. For example, I usually watch Friends show on every day for improving my English skills and when I watch the friends I feel like Chandler and I start making disgusting jokes or use phrase like as he does.

Second, Huge show or movie companies want to control people behavior. For instance, in the Turkey, people are not aware of media kings that only 3 companies have %80 the TV channels. So this is the answer of why the programs are so similar or why the TV programs are giving useless information to people. They consciously want to distract people’s attention to marriage programs or football for making them like zombie.

In conclusion, the TV programs has a massive power on the people and owner of this media obviously perceive this power. We have to be cautious otherwise, we will be no difference than zombie.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 374, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erefore, we are influenced in some way. Which will be explored in below First, it...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e way. Which will be explored in below First, it is alleged that the TV program...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, no doubt

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79365079365 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76697218031 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1276594885 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.375 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155575980534 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589303937325 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459558163952 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909087372214 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439800113277 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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