Most of the multinational companies have plants in remote areas and it is a widely accepted truth that, they make some harm to the local people and environment. I strongly believe, these companies have a social responsibility towards the affected community because of their deeds.
To begin with, multinational companies always prefer to start their pants in remote areas where people are not educated enough. The lack of education of people here, make them unaware of the pollution and health problems these factories bring. People affect so badly with the toxic gases these plants expel. Thus, the management of these companies should arrange free, routine health check ups for the population here. Another point is, while, building large factories , farmers sacrificing their farm land for the sake of factory but they are getting a small amount in return. To avoid poverty in their families company management must give a job for one member in every family. When Cochin refinary, a refinary in India, constructed many people sacrificed their land for this project, but government of India gave job one member in every family, apart from the compensation money for land. Multinational companies have to follow this as an example and should give job for affected families.
Moreover, pollution must be reduced with advanced technologies. Many advanced technologies are available in the market for pollution control but companies very seldom buy this because of their cost reduction policy. This attitude towards the the local community and the environment must change. Companies should take initiative to buy these sophisticated machines in order to curb the pollution. For instance, pollution via the water can be reduced the effective water treatment plants, some companies already made it , others also should take initiative to do the same.
To conclude, multinational companies cannot hide away from the problems they brings to local communities. Hence, they must take some fruitful actions towards these problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, apart from, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39747634069 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73265062676 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5455018006 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152749477492 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577293502314 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540168090202 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124331789647 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659127054126 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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