tpo 23
according to the reading, in the last years, the population of cedar trees have declined. for this phenomena some scientists hypothesize three
theories. however, the lecture states that this reasons aren’t sufficient.
firs of all, the reading climes that, insect parasites can be considered as an effective reasons. for instance cedar beetle can eat the wood. there is some information about killing yellow trees by insects. in contrast, the lecture says that the cedar tree is been declining in many area where it isn't any beetle. therefore many cedar trees are died without any insect.
additionally, brown bears is the second contributed hypothesis to decline cedar. the reading illustrates that the bears can eat the cedar bark as a food due to having much sugar. sometimes the bears destroy te trees because of aggressive feeding habitat. conversely, the lecture claims that, the process of declining cedar had been occurred in many islands whiteout any bears.
finally, the reading explicates that, fluctuation in climate can attribute to decreasing cedar. the tree's root can be affected by the changing in climate. the roots likely suffer damage from partial freezing on cold winter night. on the contrary, the lecture states that, the climate doesn't play an crucial role in death of cedar. he says that in many warm and low elevation lands the cedars have been distinct. beside in high elevation that the temperature is low some cedars have survived for long time.
- tpo 23 3
- Tpo 22 integrated writing 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Famous entertainers and athletes deserve to have more privacy than they have now Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 62
- tpo 24 task 1 75
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, however, second, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57762810868 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 419.366225166 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7330955942 49.2860985944 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5555555556 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 4.19205298013 692% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436760432719 0.272083759551 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140409820148 0.0996497079465 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635446938735 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22452900612 0.162205337803 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937759877219 0.0443174109184 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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