It is true that buildings are the face of a city Therefore, some people say, it is better to build new museums and town halls in order to beautify the city centers instead of renovating the old ones. However I totally oppose this argument because of the reasons mentioned below.
To begin with, old buildings are not just buildings but they carry a tradition and culture to new generation. By demolishing these buildings , we will loose remaining monuments about our culture and tradition. But renovating these building and keeping it intact is good for many reasons. First and foremost, children can get a authentic and direct knowledge about the old tradition and culture. Knowledge about the history and tradition children usually acquire from text books and pictures which will not make any impact about those things, in children minds. However feeling and experiencing things makes a lot difference in children, they never forget something they have saw and touched directly. For example, stories about Mysoor palace ( a famous palace in India built by Tippu sultan) may not be interesting for children unless they see it directly. Another point is, these buildings are a treasure of old sculpture, which is priceless and cannot reconstruct by the current generation.
Moreover, the huge expenses, relating to construction of new museums and town halls will be a burden for the government. Instead government can use this money for other developments which is necessary for the society such as infrastructure and health care sector. However renovation is less expensive than the new building construction . Hence, governments can save a significant sum of money by renovating these old buildings and keep them as intact monuments for our ancestors.
To conclude, renovation museums and town halls is the better approach towards these buildings than constructiong new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27333333333 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8237870104 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556666666667 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0630787413 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236566030317 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851304397248 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749411415715 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183207418273 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609926584999 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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