It is argued that , the societies, which do not respect or honor women cannot achieve progress. I completely agree with this argument because of the reasons mentioned in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, in the past women were confined to four walls in the house. And their only responsibility was taking care of children and doing household chores. However, now the scenario changed, nowadays women are pursuing their careers in addition to their household chores. Thus, women having extra responsibility in societies comparing to men. The efforts they are taking to take care of children as well as in the workplace are commendable. For example, my mother used to work nine to five 6 days in a week and she taking care of our need once she back in home after her office time. But father has much less responsibility when comparing with her. He could take rest after he come back from the work. Thus, I believe women deserve more respect and honor in every society due to their sacrifices.
Another important point is, women are considered physically weaker than men. However in current world she rubs shoulder with men every walks of life. From bus driver to aircraft pilot. The challenges she faces during the work is enormous, but still she overcomes all and succeed in all fields same like men. For example, Kiran bedi a successful police officer in India has a better name than her male colleagues because of her effective works in Delhis law and order system. Similarly, the number women perform well in their careers are increasing now like never before. Hence i think the society has to respect them due to their achievements in their careers as well as their contributions for the nation.
To conclude, I strongly believe a society must respect and honor its women for their contributions in family and nation. And governments should implement new rules to protect women from social evils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, similarly, so, still, thus, well, as to, for example, i think, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92901234568 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6059558548 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1473915441 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.85 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216837415744 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671888474395 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731313444915 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152625712874 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443987252887 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.