The table shows the distribution of water consumption in three main categories, domestic, agriculture and industrial, in 6 gulf countries, Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, UAE and Saudi Arabia in year 2000. The units are given as percentages for each country. Overall, although there were variances between each country, agriculture compromised the main category of water utilization all but Kuwait and Bahrain.
Saudi Arabia and Oman were the top two countries where the vast majority of water is used for agriculture, exceeding 80%, which is followed by UAE and Qatar with around 60 per cent. On the other hand, Bahrain and Kuwait were the two countries where domestic use of water makes up the major group, reaching 50% and 62% respectively.
Industrial usage were the smallest constituent of usage among three, in all six countries roughly between 5-20 per cent of utilization. This was more prominent in the four countries, Qatar, OMAN UAE and Saudi Arabia where water was mainly used for agriculture, the industrial utilization of water was just around 5 percent.
- The chart below shows the proportions of the world s oil resources held in different areas together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where 66
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- It is better to eat food which is produced locally by small farmers, rather than food produced by ‘factory farming’ and transported long distances.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 51
- Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender? 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...utilization all but Kuwait and Bahrain. Saudi Arabia and Oman were the top two c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23837209302 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82088206213 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2305667943 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208768393457 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910901925844 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481536457012 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140373285289 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413301779403 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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