The map illustrates Brandfield city plan and two possible sites of new shopping mall labelled as S1 and S2.
The first side, S1 is located in the north, close to the City Centre. The railroad passes between the city center and the S1 area, and it compromises the south border of the S1. The river which runs both through the city and the city center from north to the south direction, covers the south border of S1. An advantage of S1 is its proximity to the Housing estates, which are located on the west of the S1. The main road passes from the north of the planned shopping mall area, S1, where it intersects with the river.
Coming up to the second possible area which is called S2, located more peripherally compared to S1, just close to the south east edge of the city. It holds the advantage of proximity to the transport systems, the main road located on the west and the railroad is located on the north east of the S2. Moreover an industrial Estate is also located on the north east of the S2.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in the north, close to the City Centre. The railroad passes between the city center...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...compromises the south border of the S1. The river which runs both through the city ...
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Line 5, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...is located on the north east of the S2. Moreover an industrial Estate is also located on...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so located on the north east of the S2.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41176470588 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26693820745 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.44385026738 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8286745438 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224861669964 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113128859109 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814133034014 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189592136478 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983756361681 0.0819641961636 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 11.4140731707 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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