Some people believe that computers are more a hindrance than a help in today’s world. Others say that indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss.
There is no doubt that our life condition and appearance have changed since the introduction of computers. Not only the search for information or the data availability but also convenient connection aspects have become easier and amusing through them. In my opinion, nowadays’ modern people cannot figure out a minute of their lives without computers even if they aware that computers may affect on their health and scheduling.
Nobody can argue that computers have become inseparable part of our daily routine. What I mean by saying that we can be a witness, computers are most helpful equipments in every working state and learning condition. To be more specific, in working sphere, employees save information relating to their job, use as a calculator to solve salaries or write account documents with computers. It is difficult to manage all of them without computers because it takes much more.
It is irrefutable that computers have already replaced in learning aspects. They have been being used as an enormous library by keeping lots of books together audio and video files since they were invented. The matter of the fact, there is no any requirement to pick up tons of useful related learning materials in a big bag.
Finally, computers can be also used as an entertainment in order to relax or as a way of wasting boringly hours. In this particular term, people may find themselves using over internet, chatting with friends within some social network. On the other hand, they stand a chance to watch movies or listen to music clips by them.
To summarize, in my personal point of view, computers are really essential tools which can help make easier people’s life as much as possible because they were invented for this purpose.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 395, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...s even if they aware that computers may affect on their health and scheduling. Nobody ca...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to condition'
Suggestion: to condition
...nts in every working state and learning condition. To be more specific, in working sphere...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ented. The matter of the fact, there is no any requirement to pick up tons of usef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, i mean, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03780068729 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73515773719 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7474845697 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251025187048 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759878789448 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542324054761 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12825955949 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409103392598 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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