Being aware of what is going on around the world, even it doesn't have effect on our daily life could be important, since it results in increasing knowledge, philanthropy and connecting people to each other.
Being conscious about events happening throughout the globe increases knowledge. Today, the world is changing continuously and a lot of new discoveries are created in science or in technology everyday. Reading the news about these advancements which happen in developed countries helps people to learn something new and increase their knowledge.
To follow up the news about the other countries makes people to help each other. In addition to the natural disasters, many people in other parts of the world are struggling with famine and war. Therefore, if we know about events happening around us, we can help poor men.
The connection between people increases by being aware of occurences. Today, the communication along people is very low and many of them prefer to be silence during the way home. However reading the news about the daily issues in the world provide a great opportunity for people in order to make more discussions and be in touch with others.
In conclusion, knowing about what is going on in the world would be important even if it doesn't influence their life. Because it enables people to learn new things, helps the others struggling with disasters and causes more communication between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t is going on around the world, even it doesnt have effect on our daily life could be ...
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Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...are created in science or in technology everyday. Reading the news about these advanceme...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...efer to be silence during the way home. However reading the news about the daily issues...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...the world would be important even if it doesnt influence their life. Because it enable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 235.0 407.700716846 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07659574468 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70505788516 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548936170213 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3239118857 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173291339796 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717529392174 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551199694806 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107476233051 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321535644205 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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