Every one has their own preferred way of working on their duties and obligations. I certainly believe that workers would be more satisfied if they have several different types of tasks to do, rather than doing the same tasks over and over again. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the variety in tasks would reduce the routine and boring, which are killer factors in any job. The hardest issue that a worker may encounter would be the feeling of routine and boring with his daily tasks. Thus, workers will start not to like to show up at work, and this would affect the company terribly. Whenever the members of any company would become low motivated, this will smash it down dreadfully. On the other hand, if a worker have a variety in tasks, then he would employ all his energy in finalizing his work list. Moreover, assigning myriad tasks to workers would make them more creative. Variability in the job cause workers to squeeze every thought in their minds to be efficient and productive. My own experience is a good example of this. I once worked in a retail company, where I used to do the same exact tasks every day. After a while, I felt that I was drowning in a big ocean of routine and boring days. I went to work with very minimal motivation. Because of that, I started to care less about my duties and I became a reckless irresponsible worker, which is not who I am personally. So, if there was a variety in my tasks, I would have performed much better.
Furthermore, doing several different types of tasks would increase competition, since several workers would do common jobs. Different duties would galvanize workers to be the best in what they do. Thus, if several workers do the same job, in order to be unique, a worker must involve all his efforts in job completion. This would save work, time and effort on the company as a whole, and would rise it to the peak. Moreover, in this way, workers would have more opportunity to be promoted to a higher position. As a result, when a worker makes an advantageous job, he would craft new projects and substantiate his qualities. and eventually he would be noticed by his leaders. Because of that, he will be a better person with an exceptional future. As I said above, in my previous job, every worker had one and only task to do. So, we all did not feel that we have competitors in the company due to the fact that every one only masters his task, but does not know how to do other type of jobs. This affected the company since all of the workers were functioning like robots without even thinking what they are doing.
As a conclusion, the variety in the tasks of the workers would dramatically increase the level of satisfaction in their job. This would definitely have a bright impact on the personal job experience and on the company as a whole entity.
- TPO-05 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do.Use specific reasons and examples to suppo 88
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-15 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...rs would be more satisfied if they have several different types of tasks to do, rather than doing...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...rmed much better. Furthermore, doing several different types of tasks would increase competiti...
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Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...rojects and substantiate his qualities. and eventually he would be noticed by his l...
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Line 5, column 1026, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f jobs. This affected the company since all of the workers were functioning like robots wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, i feel, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 522.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53831417625 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50915222608 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469348659004 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 756.0 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8818123791 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6896551724 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89655172414 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228826814444 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683927904652 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811126690593 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164369322686 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694049519544 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Write the essay in 30 minutes. We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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