Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to the future generations.
Everyone prefers to live their live on their own terms. We, as youngsters live a rather carefree live without worrying about anything about the future. On the other hand, parents prefer to live in a more sophisticated way taking into accounts of all possible aspects of life and its complications. However, perhaps the most important things to consider is to be organized and live a well organized life. Person who tend to live a organized life are often successful in life in contrast, the ones living on their own term end up with nothing.
Firstly, I have been studying in a boarding school since my 9th grade. I never had a chance of living on my own term until i entered my college where i decided to live in an apartment. Unlike my parents I follow a very flexible time table of getting ready for college on my own time, getting up in the morning on my own time and so i ended up getting a low attendance in all my classes. My parents indeed follow a strict rule of getting up early in the morning, having a morning walk, exercising daily and even having breakfast on time everyday.
Secondly, my diet plans falls to be random. I eat what I feel like whenever I am at my apartment. I never had a habit of cooking so i prefer to order my food from outside or visit some restaurant to have my food. On the other hand, my parents follow a daily routine of having all their meals on time from breakfast to dinner. They hardly order food from outside and they prefer vegetables unlike me. I even noticed that when I visit my home on vacations my parents always followed a rule of having their meals all together on a table. No one is allowed to have food without a member missing, not always but usually they do.
Finally, i have seen a lot of difference in the way I live alone and they way my parents do. But, I do feel that they way I live is not beneficial at all as I often fall sick eating outside in contrast my parents hardly complain anything regarding their health.
Thus, in conclusion i feel it is best for the future generations to adapt the lifestyle of their parents as that helps us we healthy and well organized and even help to ease our life with minimum complications. There is hardly an instance that I matched my parents lifestyle but when i look upon them I always realize that the way they life is whats gives them happiness and that indeed makes me happy too. In fact, living our parents life is the best a our future generation can get the best out of them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-03-08 | nilish | 86 | view |
| 2016-12-06 | naveenmacd | 60 | view |
| 2016-12-06 | naveenmacd | 70 | view |
- Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you a 62
- Productivity and Rewards 73
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting you 66
- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that they have more leisure time.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for t 66
- "The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition." - Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or dis 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...organized life. Person who tend to live a organized life are often successful in ...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on their own term end up with nothing. Firstly, I have been studying in a board...
^^^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a chance of living on my own term until i entered my college where i decided to l...
^
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n term until i entered my college where i decided to live in an apartment. Unlike...
^
Line 2, column 336, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...up in the morning on my own time and so i ended up getting a low attendance in al...
^
Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...daily and even having breakfast on time everyday. Secondly, my diet plans falls to ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ven having breakfast on time everyday. Secondly, my diet plans falls to be rand...
^^^^
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ment. I never had a habit of cooking so i prefer to order my food from outside or...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssing, not always but usually they do. Finally, i have seen a lot of difference...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plain anything regarding their health. Thus, in conclusion i feel it is best fo...
^^^^
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... their health. Thus, in conclusion i feel it is best for the future generati...
^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...I matched my parents lifestyle but when i look upon them I always realize that th...
^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...lways realize that the way they life is whats gives them happiness and that indeed ma...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ct, living our parents life is the best a our future generation can get the best ...
^
Line 5, column 456, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'our'?
Suggestion: a; our
...ct, living our parents life is the best a our future generation can get the best out ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35483870968 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46756740311 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455913978495 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6144283474 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115269768503 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435553507012 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528369763053 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823323323983 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616051424633 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.