With advent of technology- television, FM, online news channel, updating information have became facile for today's generation. To remain competitive, to take part in debate, and to remain wary, a person should always remain updated. However, during long run -for career development, to solve problem, there is often need of specialist, according to mine opinion. The reasons of mine believe are described below.
First, after high-school, Student's courses are divided into various academic curriculum. What is the basic reason for that?
An academic institution, as students get enrolled in higher classes, wants to make any student a major specialist. It's because it helps students for career development because, being a human being, we can only be specialist in only one subject. Further, focusing on single subject aids us to develop our knowledge vastly, so we have also an opportunity to reveal something mysterious related to field. For instance, by having profound knowledge in any particular fields, most scientists in the world have achieved discovery or invention.
Second, during period of crisis, government, institution, agency always hires or gets solution from specialists rather than common person, having a broad amount of knowledge. For example, When there earthquake came in Nepal, Geographical specialist all around the globe played a pivotal part to predict upcoming after-shock. Similarly, in economic crisis, environmental degradation and health crisis, the involvement of specialist plays monumental role for solving a riddle.
Third, however, having a broad knowledge is helpful in certain activities( debate, gossip), but there is maxim: "little knowledge is dangerous". To perform an activity without too proper knowledge can cause insidious effect. For example, mine friends, even though have scare amount of idea, was an in-charge for light decoration, in college function. So, while decorating, he cannot distinguished wires that will cause cease electricity flow. however, he ,only guessing the wire, cuts the switch and tells his partner to touch the wire. Unfortunately, when he touched the wire, he was severely injured, leading him to hospital.
Thus, Even tough having a wide knowledge, I suppose, will helps an individual, but to bring significant changes in life, one should devout for achieving a vast knowledge in particular subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...news channel, updating information have became facile for todays generation. To remain...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...to make any student a major specialist. Its because it helps students for career de...
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Line 8, column 24, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'broad knowledge'.
Suggestion: broad knowledge
...ing a riddle. Third, however, having a broad knowledge is helpful in certain activities debate...
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Line 8, column 452, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...that will cause cease electricity flow. however, he ,only guessing the wire, cuts the s...
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Line 8, column 463, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ause cease electricity flow. however, he ,only guessing the wire, cuts the switch ...
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Line 10, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hospital. Thus, Even tough having a wide knowledge, I suppose, will helps an...
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Line 10, column 60, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...ving a wide knowledge, I suppose, will helps an individual, but to bring significant...
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Line 10, column 155, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'vast knowledge'.
Suggestion: vast knowledge
...n life, one should devout for achieving a vast knowledge in particular subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, third, thus, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 361.0 407.700716846 89% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64265927978 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98356596819 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670360110803 0.524837075471 128% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1324353957 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.85 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.05 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120061528589 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347271924496 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334816097418 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619337085871 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318557720694 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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